Critique?

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So you can ignore this if you think my story is amazing, perfect, and has no flaws whatsoever (Which none of you think).

So I wanted to ask you all what you think of the story. Any spelling/ grammar errors? Any misinformation? Anything annoying you about the story (besides Kaede and Shuichi not being together yet)?

Y'know, things like that. I'm curious because I want to make this story the best quality I can make it.

So, give me your harshest critique ever!

P.S, we're close to 1k reads! I'm going to be making a special for that, so until then, keep an eye out!

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