Trapped in My Mind {Book 1} [DROPPED]

Note and Requests!

Dear readers,

If anyone actually enjoys reading my book than I thank you. I myself am inpatient when it comes to ongoing stories, so if my irregular updates upset you then let me know.

The main reason I am making this is because I already have an idea of where this story is headed.

If you want to ship my main OC with other characters then feel free too, and I might make special chapters for those ships. However, she already has an established love interest.

Another thing. Some parts of my story might go off cannon ideas, and if that upsets you then feel free to drop this story. It's hard to write a story focused on one character from an outsiders prospective, the first chapter was an example of that.

Some battles our heroine will not participate in because I couldn't find a reason for her to be there. If you would like a list of the heroic spirits she has you can comment and let me know as well.

This story was a last second idea because I had just seen Hawks debut in the anime and wondered "how would he be as a parent or sibling." Hence, Koroko was born.

The quirk test was me trying not to make my main character overpowered. Most stories I've read that have done that have had the character die and come back, be dependent on others to much, become a villain, or just focus on the romance more.

There are a few good stories out there that I recommend. "Guardian Chronicles: Nirvana" on FanFiction.Net, "Golden Touch," "Heirth" (don't know if I spelt that right), and many more.

Koroko is meant to be prideful, stoic, but she also jinxes herself alot. Character personality is not one of my strong suits, so Koroko has major mood swings as a character. I'm so use to writing about crazy characters that Koroko kind of stands out amongst my OC's.

Koroko has to be one of my favorite OC's, it's also fun coming up for ways to describe her in the story.

The outfit designs are another thing I want to establish. A few designs such as, EMIYA, Maeda, Medusa, Chu (however you spell his last name), Assassin, Saber Lily, and Saber belong to the series Fate/Prisma Illya. The other are original designs or heavily based off of the Heroic Sprits actual outfit.

Koroko herself is another thing, at this point in the series I haven't revealed much about her. Even in the drafts I have for upcoming chapters she hasn't revealed anything. She even has an established voice, Katelyn Barr, but I didn't focus on backstory.

I will say that Koroko's parents are dead. That is established and it will be brought up casually throughout this series. This is the one series that I want in a separate universe then my others, so making more characters that will be brought up multiple times is out of the question for me.

I will say that I have a story I want to write on the fate series and it will be connected to this universe. However, it is a prequel and will have two new OC's.

Once I have more of an idea of where that story is going I might mention those characters in this story. There is a heroic spirit who will be brought up, the Fenris Wolf, who is not an established fate character. This is one of the main characters for the other book in the fate universe.

I'm not promoted the story or anything. This message is just about filling in holes that have appeared or may come in the future.

Here's an official list of drawbacks for both of Koroko's quirks. Which I do not have a established reason for why they are so different than her brothers.

Quirk Drawbacks for Fate: Berserker Class Moves are harder for her to control. She needs to eat a lot or the moves will fail. There are time limits for the caster and rider classes.

Quirk Drawbacks for Mind Movie: A slight headache depending on the thought. Regular thoughts make it hard for her to realize what's happening. Memories are played out like a movie, making her freeze up.

Now for requests!

If you would like to see any characters that aren't Heroic Sprits or are your favorite heroic spirit appear then comment on this paragraph.

If you would like Koroko to either have a love rival, or someone who likes her then comment on this paragraph.

If you would like a special crossover with an AU, the actual show, one of the fate series, or a another one of my OC's (who you will not choose so it can be a surprise) then comment on this paragraph.

If you would like me to make drawings or if you make any drawings then comment on this paragraph which one.

If you want a specific heroic spirit to meat a specific BNHA character then comment on this paragraph.

Thank you for reading, even if you didn't read the whole thing.

I hope you enjoy my book. -CreepypastaORFnaf