The spring might feel far away, you were born red, gotta face the harsh world. The thunderstorm might seem never to end but you gotta wander around looking for your reason.
Are you too looking for a reason to hold on for a bit more? A reason to con...
So far, the story is really interesting. Each scenes contain the right amout of details; not too much, not too brief. Scenes are not cringry but cute as well, and the format of the chapters are well organized. Punctuation marks have been used correctly. The author gave credit to the video, where she got inspiration to write the story, and I appreciate the fact that she did not copy the whole scene exactly, but rather turned it to another amazing plot.
The female protagonist's character has eventually developed, which was actually the goal. However, the way it developed was a bit fast in my perspective as in the second chapter she was already having fun and forgetting all her struggles with male protagonist...but we should remember that the girl is depressed enough for trying to jump off a bridge, and most depressed people take long time to "heal".
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