The spring might feel far away, you were born red, gotta face the harsh world. The thunderstorm might seem never to end but you gotta wander around looking for your reason.
Are you too looking for a reason to hold on for a bit more? A reason to con...
The story was overall very good and pretty! I personally liked the plot very much and it was very interesting and cute! The grammar was good, the vocabulary was enriched. I love the story!
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This story is good so far but still need more exciting things. It's written so well even the story plot is interesting. The author conveyed everything in all aspects so well but need to improve more especially some parts make readers feel bored.
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I personally liked the title and the cover. The description was good too! The grammar and vocabulary was fine, it just lacked some bits and pieces here and there. It got boring due to all sad things at one point but, then author wrote the next few chapters well, so I forgot about the boringness. The vocabulary can be enriched and grammar improved. Personally I liked the story. There is always for improvement and if she / he improves...she / he could do very well.
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