*Tobias View*
I dont really know what to say to tris.. only that i want to be with her.. i wonder how shes going to take it, and i want to know. Do you think age is going to matter? i mean i am 18 and shes 16. I wonder if we will be boyfriend and girlfriend, and if we will be how long will it last? will she say yes? or say no. I try to think when running with her.
I try to think of a new place were Christina and Will wont know of. I can only think of my room. I take a sharp turn and she runs into me, and we fell to the ground.
"Well...this is awkward" says Tris. "Yea a little bit."
I get up and gives her my hand to help her up, and we just walk together, she lets go of my hand now i dont know what to think. I take her in and i shut the door, i have to delete the footage later in the command room to..
"So I have to talk to you about something, Tris"
"What its about" Says Tris. "Its about us."
And I lean in and kiss her, she doesnt pull back, i wonder whats going through her mind right now. I wonder what she is thinking. She pulls back, and her face is red, and i grin. This is what i wanted to tell you that i have feelings for you.. she grins.
Tris's View Point
Oh gosh, he kissed me.. does this mean we are boyfriend and girlfriend? or nothing it was just a kiss and it doesnt matter, i am actually starting to like him. But tommrow is going over fear landscapes and then the day after that we go to a instructors fear landscape then its our landscape.. I am nervous to see how many fears i will going to have, knowing my luck i will have like 20 or something.
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