*This is a part that i added my self. I think this might have happeneds between Tris and Four BEFORE they were sent to war. So please, bare with me because i am new at writing and this is a short story about Divergent IN MY VIEW. So please, nothing harsh, i am just summing up the story in my words, but kinda not. whatever. but this was NOT part of the story, something that i am adding. Thanks!(:*
As we walked back to Tobias room, he starts sighing. Which seriously confused me because i thought he wanted to celebrate with me, knowing that i got the first rank over everybody. He looks worried like something is going to turn out bad.. I will never know because Tobias doesnt like when i ask questions, he just doesnt like to spill his emotions.
"Tobias, why arent we walking to your room, or my room in that matter..?"
"Because i want to take you somewhere special, and i have it all planned out, so dont ask questions. okay. k."
I just nodded instead of talking knowin he would be mad if i talked to him. We walk up the stairs, his fingers lanced into mine, and we just walked up with a smile on my face knowing were he would take me, the rooftop.
Off course its dark out, it was a full moon with many stars out in the night sky. I actually find this pretty romantic if you ask me. I never really been on a actually date, heck i dont even know if this is a date or not, but if it is, he must have planned it because there was a table with dessert on the table (We ate the banquet).
"Aww Tobias, this is so adorable!!"
"Thanks, i thought it all out just for you my dear." he said with a smile while pulling out my chair to sit down infront of the chocolate pie, he knows that i loved chocolate pie from when i was rambling about food. i personally love food.
We ate and we talked and he brought me over to the ledge, and i sat right by him and put my head on his shoulder and we looked up at the stars.
"This is really nice Tobias, thanks." I said kissing his cheek.
"Your welcome, anything i can do for you." He leaned down and kissed me. We really havent kissed much, but when we kiss, its so amazing.
As he deepens the kiss, we fall on the ground with him landing on top of me, and when i say on top of me, i mean like legit on top of me with him kissing me. Awkward right? Well i enjoyed it.
We continuted to kiss, making sure we didnt go any further of this relationship. He finally got off of me and laid down right beside me looking back at the night sky.
Two hours pass
He walks me back to my room and kisses me goodnight.
Not knowing what will happen tonight...
Haha cliffhanger, but i finally updated this story! Been forever hasnt it? Oh well i promise to keep up with story for now on. But if you know the story, you should know what happens next! But just to let you know, in this story i will continue to add scenes from my view and add the some of the things from Insurgent. But thanks for getting me so many reads and keep voting please! And comments are always welcomed! Byee<3
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