Why me / Hiatus

The Rewriting of Ch.1

●[Payton ]
It was lightly snowing today as I walked through the usally full park that was empty today due to it being to cold for parents to let there kids out to play not wanting them to get sick, I was walking of the park and I started heading toward the old Green Bridge(The bridges are named after its color).

When I get to the entrance of the bridge I looked back at my tracks and watched as some disappeared, I turned back around and walk about 6 feet onto the bridge. I looked over the barrier at the black icy lake, I felt like it was welcoming me to jump, like a mother's warm embrace. I climbed over the barrier and pressed my hand onto one of the poles as a little way to prevent the wind to push me over the ledge "Not yet wind let me say my goodbyes." I wisppered, as I was almost done quietly saying my last goodbye a voice yelled, "...and mom I lo-" "Stop don't do this!". When I heard the voice it was like it snapped me out of my trance that I put on myself, I was breaking into little pieces as I grasped what I almost did.

I grabbed onto one of the barriers poles as i finally started fearing the darkness that came with death, I bent down to be as close to the pole as possible and in the process I looked straight into the soft emerald green eyes of the guy that broke me free from my trance with tears rolling down my fair skinned face.

●(Mark)
When he turned to look at me I saw his purple eyes were filled with tears that gathered into salty streams that ran down his fair skinned cheeks, as he held onto one of the bridges iron poles. He was on his knees on the other side of the bridge's right wall barrier, he was shaking violently and his arms were the only thing keeping him from falling off the bridge and into the icy lake below. I ran to the boy as fast as I could (I'm fast as Frick boiss!),

I was on the complete oppiset side of the bridge. I was fearing that if I didn't get to him fast enough hes hands would slip and he'd fall, as I was running (with my Walmart sneaker.) I almost sliped on some ice but I caught myself before I fell . I finally made it to the right barrier, he was still in the same position that he was in when I started running towards him. He might be paralysed with fear but he definitely isn't cold because he be rocking (Mark did you really just think that, Well yah I like using rocking instead of wearing sometimes can we get back to Payton now Sally, Yep.)

a long and thick patted snow jacket that has fur going along the edge of the hood, I started tring to calm his nerves down with my'mother voices'( a soft sounding voices that he used to talk to kids that would come into the coffee shop, it was named that by his older sister and coworkers, Sally did you really have to say that. No but I still did. ), " Hey buddy, can you hear me?". I waited a couple seconds and saw and heard no responces, so I resolted to plan-B ( Dose the B mean bacon?!, We might never know).

I started to move my arms towards him so that I could pick him up and move him to saftey, when one of my arms touched him I saw his body flinch but the boy didn't even acknowledge that he was touched. While I was rapping my arms around his torso, I'm now 100% sure that this kid isn't cold, he's as warm as a oven preheated to 400, he never left his fear induced paralyzation even if his black jeans were soaked by the snow that melted around him, before I started to pull him up and over the barrier I informed him of what I was going to do.

In my'mother voices'" Okay buddy I'm going to pull you up and away from the ledge.", I started it pull him up and I overestimate how much force I needed to use, this kid is really light (One could say that he is a, Sally stop, he is a light weight, Sally you better be paying us extra today, ok sorry.) and in one motion I pulled his arms free and fell backwards, "Aw." (HE NEED SOME MILK!) I landed on my back but the boy landed on top of me so he shouldn't be hurt(His back hurt a little due to how fast they fell)