Louis' POV:
i knew today was going to be a big day. Chelsea might wake up or she might not. i knew i was gonna stay there all day with Liam and the others would come sometime during the day. i was really wishing she would wake up today.
i woke up at about 9:00am. i threw some random clothes on. i didn't care what i looked like at the moment. all i cared about was Chelsea.
i was in the middle of eating some lucky charms when Liam came downstairs. "hey mate, how are you today?" i finished my mouthful and answered him. "good, nice to get a proper nights sleep."
"yeah, you needed it." Liam got some cereal and we both ate it quickly so we could get to the hospital. i was driving so fast. i didn't want to miss her waking up. "woah Louis, slow the crap down!" Liam said to me, holding onto his seat for dear life. "sorry, i just don't wanna miss Chelsea waking up.i wanna be the first person to see her again."
"i know mate but if you speed we might be pulled over and that will delay us even more." i didn't think about this. "yeah, you're right." for the rest of the journey, which was about 10 minutes, we had the radio on. when we pulled up in tbhe car park, we went straight to Chelsea's hospital room. im surprised we had no fans outside. Chelsea was still resting peacefully, like always. "hey babe, you might wake up today." i said, kissing her forhead and sitting down next to her like i did everyday.
me and liam were chatting for about half an hour when Celina and Harry walked in. "hey we bring food!" Harry shouted throwing a bag of crisps at us. "cheers mate." i said, munching away. Celina and Harry were in their own little world. Liam had gone to the toilet. Zayn and Niall were getting ready to come here. i was just whispering to Chelsea. "i love you baby girl, please wake up. i miss the sound of your voice, your warm hugs and your soft kisses."
i kissed her on the hand then looked over at Helina. they were so good together. but i couldn't help being jealous of them. they could kiss,cuddle and do cute stuff together. but not me and Chelsea. yes, i could still kiss her and everything but she can't kiss back. and we can't talk to each other. the sooner she wakes up, the better.
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we had been at the hospital for 3 hours now. Zayn and Niall had come in a few times. and the others did the same. sadly we couldn't be in here all together, it would be too crowded. i wasn't hungry so i let Zayn and Niall get some food for themselves. i decided to check Chelsea's phone. 2 messages from Eleanor and 1 from her mum. i decided to look at the message from her mum first. i didn't care what Eleanor had to say.
-Mum <3-
hey Chels, you haven't been answering my calls. is everything okay?
oh crap. we forgot to tell her parents. i phoned her straight away.
"hello, mrs payne?"
"hello, who is this?"
"its Louis, i need to tell you something about Chelsea."
"Oh what's wrong? is she alright?"
"well, as you know, we are going out and my ex is jealous so beat her up and Chelsea is now in hospital in a coma."
"Oh my goodness! when did this happen? when will she wake up?"
it happened about a week ago. i guess we were all so worried we forgot to contact you. but don't worry, she should wake up any day now."
"Oh my goodness. well when she does wake up, can you tell her to phone me please?"
"Yes of course mrs Payne."
"thank you, goodbye."
"goodbye."
i felt so bad. i had totally forgotten about telling Chelsea's parents. how could i forget about them? i then remembered about the texts from Eleanor. i was curious about what she had to say this time.
-07328697811- (MADE UP NUMBER!!!!!!!!!!)
see you still haven't woken up. take it im invited to the funeral. i hope you suffer a lot Chelsea. and when Louis is heartbroken, i will be helping him recover and i will seem like such a nice person. haha Louis WILL be mine!!
she is a complete and utter bitch. i then opened the second message from her.
-07328697811-
i shouldn't be wasting my money on texting a dead person. especially a boyfriend stealing bitch like you. have a nice time in hell babe :) xxx
what has happened to her? she seemed so nice when we were dating. but she was probably just using me for the fame. i put Chelsea's phone back on the table. i started fidling with the ends of her hair, waiting for her to wake up.
-Chelsea's POV:-
i heard Louis on the phone to someone but i couldn't work out who it was. i tried openeing my eyes. nothing. i was missing everyone so much now. i hope everyone was okay. i was particularly worried about Celina. we were so close to each other and she was such a sensitive person. i started going through some of the amazing memories we had together in wolverhampton.
we were both 8 and Liam was 11. we found an old tyre one day, so we decided to make a tyre swing. Liam was swinging on it and it had been raining the night before, making a huge puddle underneath. me and Celina were pushing him back and fourth. then suddenly the rope snapped and Liam landed straight in the puddle. me and Celina were crying with laughter, while Liam was sitting, soaking wet, in a muddy puddle.while remembering this, my mouth moved slightly. i tried opening my eyes again. still nothing.
another memory was when we were 10 and Liam was 13. it was his 13th birthday so my family and Celina's family had a little party for him. we went to the cinema to see toy story 2. he loved it so much.
one christmas when we were 14 and Liam was 17. Celina now had a huge crush on Liam because apparentley he was good looking. Celina took him under the misletoe we had outside our house and kissed him. thankfully he didn't like it and she doesn't have a crush on him anymore. yet again, my mouth started to form a smile. i tried opening my eyes again and ................
Louis' POV: (lol this pov is SOOOOOO short :p)
i was starting to get pins and needles in my legs. i needed to walk around. Celina and Harry were in the room at the time. "be right back guys, just gonna get some thing from the vending machine."
"okay" harry said. i started to walk towards the door (are we friends or are we more? sorry couldnt be helped :D) when i heard a voice. "where you going tommo"
"Chelsea?"
hahaha cliffhanger! i love doing this to u guys!i still love you though! thanks for all the support! follow me on twitter @marriedtogrimmy and follow Celina @chasingtommo i will uodate as soon as i can but i just can't find much time at the moment with all myy school work. once again i think Eleanor is a nice person i am just making a story and making stuff up about her!! she wouldn't do this its just for my story! so please don't hate!!
OMG LITTLE MIX'S ALBUM ASDFGHJKL i probably mentioned this before but it is so perfect!!!
okay imma let you leave now byeeeeee
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I can't take this anymore (Liam Payne/Louis Tomlinson fanfic)
FanfictionHello, my name is Chelsea. Chelsea Payne. yes, younger sister of Liam Payne from One Direction. I'm 16 i live with my brother and his band mates. i love my brother so much he is truly amazing. but when it comes to school, things don't go to well... ...