Fallen

3# Kaylow

Following the sun, looking around at everything there is to see, I ended up in a place with a whole lot of buildings surrounded by a wall. There were A lot of people as well, two men were standing in front of a gate and stopped me when I got there.
One of them asked me "What is your business here in Kaylow?". I looked at him in confusion hearing his words but not understanding. He then asked again "Miss, what is your business here? Can you understand what I am saying?" He had A concerned look on his face.
I just kept staring at him as he suddenly looked away and let me through. I smiled slightly at him before walking in, as if I were saying thank you.

Once inside I saw so many people just walking around and talking, I couldn't make out what they were saying but it felt so good to hear them. A little boy saw me and ran up to me and started staring at my eye, the back one, I just looked back at him as he started to shiver until his mother grabbed his arm and yelled at me. I blinked looking up at the lady as she seemed scared and angry at the same time, was she scared of me? Did I do something wrong? Suddenly I got grabbed by the hand and pulled away into an alley, I look at who is taking me and see A young woman.
Her hair was hazel brown, in A braid that came down a little over her shoulder, her eyes were bright green and she had fair skin and black drawings on her arms, tattoos maybe? She was wearing dark clothing, A brown piece of cloth over her breasts, and dark mini-shorts. She had A long hood around her and two blades on her lower back.

She let go of me in the alley and looked at my eye, she asked me "Who are you?", just like before I didn't get what she was saying so I just kept quiet. "Not much of a talker, are ya?" She said while chuckling "Well, that's okay. My name is Lillith but you can just call me Lilly like everyone does."
I looked at her "Emh .... Li-Lilly?" She then nodded and smiled "Yup, that's me." She said while offering me some water and bread. I accepted the offer since I felt like I was gonna die of hunger.
Lilly then took me to an old building where we went into the basement. There were other people down in the basement. All of them had tattoos just like Lilly did, it made me wonder. Why do these people have tattoos but not the people that I saw, before I met Lilly?

A man walked up to us and started talking to Lilly. After their conversation, he looked at me and said "Welcome to Kaylow, the little lady. Lilly already told me you don't seem to understand us but if you do I just wanted to say this. We will see each other tomorrow for now you should rest." He smiles and walked away. Lilly then took me to A room and sat me on the bed, "You can sleep here, I'll bring you some new clothes in A bit" she said and then walked out again.

I felt exhausted, everything that happened, in just one day, was so confusing. I laid myself down on the bed and dozed off almost instantly and fell into a deep sleep.

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