The title is apt for your story and it went very well with the story line but was very common.
Cover:3 /5
The cover could be much better by adding some more pictures .It requires some editing like the colour of the font and all to be perfect.
Blurb:4 /5
The blurb is very well written as it gave small glimpse about the main lead of the story.
Plot:5 /5
The plot is something out of the box .I loved it .You did really a great job.
Grammar: 5/5
There aren't any grammatical mistakes .It increased the beauty of the book.
Characters: 4/5
You portrayed them very well and equal importance is given to every characters in the plot.It would have been better if you had described every characters .
Flow:4.5 /5
The flow of the story was good its was neither fast nor slow it was moderate and there were no breaks which made the story interesting.
Overall:4.5/5
Overall,the story was very well written like every element of the story was good like grammar,characters and flow but I suggest you to edit your cover then it would be perfect
