Undercover (shigadeku)

A Nap (Edit of "My 'Death')

Me- Hi. This my first story so tell me how I can improve my writing. Just to clarify Izuku will be 16 for most of the story but in the beginning he is 14. Shigaraki is 17, Toga is 16 and Dabi is 17 and Natuos twin Fuyumi is 17 and Todoroki is 16 I only switched the ages because I want them to all be around the same age.

Izuku- Today I walked to school like every other day, but there was this bad feeling. Almost like something was going to happen I just didn't know what yet. I got to my class early so I just sat at my desk till everyone else started entering the classroom.

(Time Skip)

Izuku- After class I got stoped by Kachan. I was getting ready to leave when he yelled at me (like usual) but this time he's different. He never went as far as to bait me. I guess today was going to be a bad day. Kachan told me "take a swan dive off the roof and pray for a quirk in your next life" before burning my shoulder with little explosions form his hands and walking away. I think about what he said for a second before picking all my thing up and leaving class. I decide that Kachan is right but I can't do anything about it yet. But it still makes me angry. I hate him. Who the hell dose he think he is. He's not a hero. I should stop calling him Kachan. He's Bakugo we're not friends we haven't been friends for a long time. I understand that not. To make my day worse I got lost in thought because now I have no idea where I am. I don't have much time to think about that as I hear the sewer rattle. This ugly goo monster pops out and grabs me before I can even turn around to run. Slowly the goo enters my mouth. Down my throat as it fills up my lungs with wet sludge. My vision begins to fad as I hear a large boom and see a bright yellow person? What is that? My question is answers as the "yellow person" Alabama smashes the sludge and me into a near by ally wall. It's all might maybe he thinks I can be hero. I want to talk to him but I start coughing.

All Might- "Are you alright young..."

Izuku- "Midoriya.... I- I think I'm ok."

All Might- "Then I must me in my way."

Izuku- "WAIT" I jump onto All Mights leg as he jumps away and before I knew it were on a rooftop the highest roof top in the city. "All Might please just answer my question do you think a quirkless person like me could ever be a hero?"

All Might- Stupid kid "Of course not" Shit my time is running out.

Izuku- I-. What happing to him!?! "Ar-Are you okay?"

All Might- I jump away before this idiot can see much more.

Izuku- Then he's just gone. He left me alone after a villain attack on the tallest building in the city. I wonder what would happen is I just walked forward. There's no railing here.

(Time skip)

Inko- I got a call from the police. I answered I fast I could they told me something happened to my baby. I was scared. I got to the hospital as fast as I could and found him. There he was breathing but wasn't in stable condition so I called Mitsuki. I explained to her that something happened to baby and the police wouldn't tell me what. She said she would come with Katsuki since they were close friends, at least me and Mitsuki thought they were...

Mitsuki- When I got there izuku was just laying there. Inko told me is breathing was just barley stable so we might have to leave before visiting hours are over. I felt my heart sink when I saw Inko she was dead on her feet and had puffy eyes. I realized I had pulled Katsuki in the room but had him facing the other way I let him go and hugged Inko. Katsuki stoped yelling when I let him go and turned around.

Katsuki- I turned around and saw the old hag hugging aunty-Inko. It was almost 3 minutes before I realized we were in a hospital room. I looked around. My eyes got caught on the familiar site of green hair. Deku was laying in a hospital bed. The doctor came in and told us that he was as found in a puddle of blood at the bottom of Matsufu Incorporated. Apparently he fell off of it. The near by security cameras make it look like he was just watching the view and then fell. He was in a coma. On one knows when he will wake up.

Inko- My baby that's all I cared about. I need him to be okay.

Note- This story is currently under adaptation and is being changed. My YouTube channel is completely abandoned and also is under a different name now. I don't plan on updating my channel.