A/N: back by popular request! Next chapter will be longer btw!!
It was the gathering suddenly. "Who needs transitions?" talked Shinepaw. It was a good point. "Help! Evil rogues invaded our territory!!!!!!! said Starrystar" said Starrystar. "STARRYSTAR, STOP NARRATING EVERYTHING" said Loudstar loudly. "Hah, Loudstar's so loud, isn't he, handsome StarryClan apprentice?" said Shinepaw. The StarryClan apprentice was SO handsome, and also the author forgot to put him in the allegiances so he was just added. Wow, I'm such a good author. DON'T FORGET TO VOTE!! FOLLOW, LIKE AND SUBSCRIBE!!! IT'S FREE!!!! RING THE BELL!!! JOIN MY PATREON!!!! THANKS FOR WATCHING!!!!
Wow, I made that so subtle.
"Are you done?" asked Starrystar, "I need BananaClan to help drive out the generic evil rogues know as the Superevilcrazymaddecendedfromtigerstargoingtokilleveryonebonecrushinggeneric Rogue Group.".
"SuRe!" Loudstar agreed eagerly, nodding his head so much he looked like a bobble head, then the gathering ended.
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