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eternity's fall

|now serving.
Mikalynx

[ t i t l e ]
10/10

-i'm not expecting na double meaning 'yung fall. huhu, ang ganda! 🥺❤

[ b o o k c o v e r ]
9/10

-ang ganda niya rin, naisip ko agad nu'ng una na it's abt summer love gano'n pero it's young love pala, nice!

[ d e s c r i p t i o n ]
10/10

-sarap sa eyes ng english mo!

[ p l o t ]
34/35

-i really like problematic main characters 'yung palaging may conflict, it shows lang talaga na walang perfect and there's a room for character development! (wawa si pierce)

[ w a y o f w r i t i n g ]
34.5/35

-ang ganda ng vocab mo, english man or filipino, i'm impressed!

em dash

-use the pinakamahabang hyphen  (-) which is en dash (—) kung naputol 'yung sentence or gusto mo pa siyang dugtungan.

apostrophe

Huwag='Wag

ps. ang cute nu'ng niaaway, me is na-so-soft.

na lang

-magkahiwalay po 'yan ha? dapat po na lang

|note.

hi, thank you for trusting my shop! maganda 'yung story mo and alam kong mag-i-improve ka pa lalo.

btw, nakita ko 'yung author's note mo sa isang chapter, gusto ko lang sabihin na hindi mo dapat binabase sa iba 'yung magiging worth mo, focus on urself, focus on your craft and the rest will follow. magaling ka okay? darating din sila sa 'yo, 'wag mo lang susukuan ang sarili mo.

|bookcover.

here's ur freebie! u aren't obliged to use it po pero if u want to claim it just message me sa FB (Jill WP) or sa twitter (miss_asditudes) have a nice mornight!

(don't 4get 2 vote!)