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when our eyes met

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Sam_Rey

[ t i t l e ]
9/10

-bet q 'yung title mo

[ b o o k c o v e r ]
8.5/10

-nice cover!

[ d e s c r i p t i o n ]
9/10

-ang galing, akala ko 'di si kiefer 'yung lead

[ p l o t ]
33/35

-ocakes naman siya, lowkey cliché pero at the same time unpredictable! good job!

[ w a y o f w r i t i n g ]

all-caps + bold

-u don't have to capitalize the letters at the same time make ot bold just to make ur readers feel it, una, 'di siya advisible sa formal writing ++ masakit siya sa mata, just italicize it instead.

-then ganu'n din sa exclamation point, 'di mo siya kailangang damihan, okay na 'yung isa.

-apostrophe, it should be 'yun po

em dash

-use the pinakamahabang hyphen or the em dash (—) kung naputol or gusto niyong dagdagan ng thought ang isang sentence.