At hospital:
Doctors r treating kartik. And the family is waiting. All r praying for him. Operation had been done nd it is successfull but as kartik was critical it was said if he is not concious in 48 hrs he will slip into coma. Its been 46 hours that kartik is sleeping. Only 2 hrs r left.
Doc: dekhiye 48 ghante hone wale h aur koi improvement nhi h ab bs 2 ghante bache h aisa lg rha h ki wo jeena nhi chata.ab to bs duayin hibkm kar skti h.
All get shocked hearing it specially naira her kartik dont wanna live😭😭😭.
Naira: doc..doc kya kya main ek bar try karu wo meri bat nhi talega please ek bar try krne dijiye.
(She is fumbling nd crying)
Doc:aap try krke dekh liye nd o hope wo jag jaye.
(Doc leaves)
Family comes to naira to support her
N to family: wo aise kaise nhi jeena chata kya main uski kuch nhi lgti itne salo bad mile aur wo fir mujhe chod rha h hamesha aise krta h wo usne mera aur kairav ka ek bar bhi nhi socha😭.
Swarna: naira sambhalo tum kartik ki takat ho aise mat toto use wapis lao ek tum hi ho jo use wapis la skti ho. (All other nodes)
N: main chodungi nhi aise kaise nhi jeena chata wo.
(N goes to kartik room)
Nd she breaks down seeing him so vulnerable so pale nd goes towards him with slow nd steady steps.
N: kar kartik utho na bhut hogya ab tumhara uth jao na kitna soyege aur please utho tumhe pta h na main nhi reh skti mere liye na shi to apne tadpole ke liye utho. Uth jao
(At hospital entrance one boy nd one girl enters)
Boy: iss bar aisa kuch nhi hoga
Girl: hn is bar wo humne nhi chod skte hum unhe aone sath leke jayenge
(Back to kaira)
N:please na mendak uth jao jo tum kahoge main wo krungi kbhi pareshan nhi krungi. Uth jao na papa apne bacche je liye uth jao
(Nd she rests her head on his hand)
The boy nd girl reaches towards the reception nd enquires about kartik)
Receptionist: ji aaplog kon?
B nd g(boy nd girl) we r his family.
Receptionist: room no.420
B nd g: thanks(nd they run towards the room)
In room
(Naira is sleeping keeping her head on kartik bed)
(Whereas our hero is sleeping )
In dream:
Kartik sees a bright light coming towards him nd angles smiling at him he is confused. Then one of the angles say.
A: my child comes with us free urself
K: yess mere yha hone se sirf problem aur agar main yha se chla gya to sb thik ho jayega meri family mera baacha mera tadpole sb khush rahenge.
(This is all a dream nd simuntaneosly that boy nd girl reaches where goenkas nd singhus r standing they see the doctor coming nd all rush towards him asking how is kartik doctor sees the boy nd girl nd gets confused seeing them nd asks who r u nd then family also sees nd gets confused nd seeing the commotion naira wakes up kisses kartik forehead nd comes out of kartik room nd sees the scene nd rushes towards the doc nd then the boy nd girl says we r his family).
Note : These three scenes were going on simuntaneously.
The family nd naira gets stunned hearing it(doc had already left)
Naksh: kya ? Hum h kartik ki family tum log kon ho?😡
B n G chulckes nd say tum log jaisi family se to acha h family ho hi na agar kartik ki family hote na to yeh pta hota ki kartik ko heart attack dusri bar aya h nd usne sucide krne ki koshish ki h arey agar tum logo ki galtiyan ginnwane baithe na to puri zindagi nikal jayegi aur hum yha sirf kartik ke liye h.
(All gets schoked. They dont about their son only they feel ashamed)
Most schoked one is naira only two words sucide nd heart attack wo bhi dusri bar. She dont how to handle herself. Just few words left her mouth come back papa, mendak mera kartik.
Screen freezes on schoked family faces ,angry boy nd girl,broken naira nd dreaming kartik.Hey guys i m so sorry i promised i will update but i got busy with my entrance exams but now i m back nd will upadate but now i m free nd promise to update regulary.
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Love nd peace always🤍❤️
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I Don't Deserve Love!
Ficción Generalit's from the current track but it's all about kartik's pain Nd his p.o.v. Even after being through so much he still didn't get his love. Nd maybe in some parts it includes Naira Nd other family point of view but mainly it will be on Kartik.