ABAYA BHAIRVI
SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 9
BOOK COVER 9
STORY DESCRIPTION 9
STORY LINE 9
TOTAL 46
Ajay bhairav is an alluring piece of supernatural . The book is written well . The story base is strong and so is the story description and story line . Though a little improvement in character development and some grammatical errors will make it a fine piece . rest everything is awesome and the way indian culture and the feminine character of goddess durga is used as a portrayal is fab.
QUEEN VISHAKHA
SPELLING 4
GRAMMAR 3
BOOK COVER 5
ATORY DESCRIPTION 3
ATORY LINE 5
TOTAL 20
Well I would not like to disspoint you but as a judge its my duty to bring our flaws . Your story has destroyed story base and so many grammatical and spelling errors . It looks like you did not consult any other person to read it once before you put it out for reading. And the story line is so distorted the introduction and blurb only has so many errors and that makes it impossible for the reader to trust you with their time .The story too is very predictable very much . I would also suggest changing the cover page so it's not at all catchy . Take no offense as a judge. I need to point out flaws and your book needs serious attention.
SHADOW BROOK ONCE HUNGRY TWICE BITTEN
SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 8
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 8
STORY LINE 9
TOTAL 45
The book is written in a remarkable manner indeed . It has a solid story base and a perfect story line. Character development is fab .And creativity is also appreciated eg: the aesthetics that are put up . The balance between the character's dream world or shadowbrook and reality is kept intact. although I would like to point out that there are some instances in the story where there is an arena of confusion where the main character is -whether in reality or in shadowbrook . And some minute grammatical errors. Rest the book is great
MY SWEET CAT:
SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 9
BOOK COVER 7
STORY DESCRIPTION 7
STORY LINE 8
TOTAL 41
The story overall is catchy and influencing no doubt . Though the frame of reference keeps changing from one character to another the story line is kept intact and crystal clear . I would like to point out something I observed which is that there the perspective of the story is changing between many characters which is not necessary at many points in the story . I would advise to keep the frame of reference to minimal characters as possible that adds more clarity and your creativity is intact too. And there is a need to pay attention towards the cover of a book as it's not catchy and its cover which most people first notice and guess your story from so keep it stunning .
BE FEARLESS:
SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 10
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 9
STORY LINE 9
TOTAL 48
This book is written precisely and in alluring manner . the character development is impressive . The balance between her (main character) real life and her gift is intact throughout the story . This story brings out the basic lament of human nature that mostly people fail to understand that uncertainty of life has to be enjoyed and not taken other way as a fear of upcoming challenges or death. The character description and introduction is remarkable and helps the reader to slip into the story . Overall excellent piece of work.
KWAMI
SPELLING 8
GRAMMER 8
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 46
WRITE UP: GOOD!
This story line is absolutely amazing! The book cover and story description both depicted the story very very well. The grammar and spelling was a bit off. There were some misspellings in the description and the first four chapters. I did not see any in the fifth chapter though. There were also some grammatical errors in the first few chapters, but was made for in the fifth chapter as well. The overall experience was good!
AZIRA THE VAMPIRE QUEEN:
SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 9
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 49
WRITE UP: FABULOUS
The story line is absolutely beautiful and amazing! The book cover and story description both depicted the story very well. The grammar was amazing but there were a few misspellings, especially in the description. The overall experience was fabulous!
GAME ON, ALPHA
SPELLING 10
GRAMMER 10
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 50
WRITE UP: OUTSTANDING!
The story line is absolutely amazing!!! The cover is captivating, and the description is wonderful. There are little to no spelling or grammatical mistakes. There are just very few words to describe the incredibleness of the story...
THE VAMPIRE INVASION:
SPELLING 8
GRAMMER 8
BOOK COVER 10
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 46
WRITE UP: GOOD!
The story description was amazing and made me want to read the story. The bok cover was amazing and matched the story line and description. I was hooked right from the beginning. The down side is that there are a lot of grammatical errors. There is also a spelling issue. There are words that are not spelled correctly hence taking away from the experience of reading the story...
FALLEN BUT NEVER FORGOTTEN
SPELLING 9
GRAMMER 8
BOOK COVER 8
STORY DESCRIPTION 10
STORY LINE 10
TOTAL 45
WRITE UP: GOOD
The Story description was amazing and made me want to really read the story, however the book cover did not match the story or title. The cover makes it seem as if the character did not have the hardships, but the story and the title say otherwise. The story line is amazing! I was hooked right from the beginning. The downside is that there are a lot of grammatical errors. I have posted at least an error needing to be fixed in the comments, but I have also seen others who were correcting the errors. The overall experience was good.
*DRUMROLLS!!!!*
THE WINNERS!
1.GAME ON, ALPHA
2.AZIRA THE VAMPIRE QUEEN
3.BE FEARLESS
Congrats!!!!
RUNNERS UP!
ABHAYA BHAIRAVI
THE VAMPIRE INVASION
KWAMI
The winners and runners up can pm their email id for stickers!!!! Again CONGRATS all of you!
Participants, don't worry you have improved and will win future competitions if you keep on updating yourselves and learn from the winners. For that, you can check up in their interviews I have posted!
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