| The Depth of Words |

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by randomlypoetic

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by randomlypoetic

Book: The Depth of Words

Author: @thejoyouspear

• Book cover (7/10)

I like the cover, but I think you can edit the fonts. Also as a person with OCD, the title isn't aligned perfectly in the middle. (sorry about this lol)

• Book title (10/10)
This is a pretty title.

• Blurb (7/10)
There's a comma splice error in it. Yet, I like that you put a quote. Maybe use a ~ before the name of Robert Frost.

• Grammar (12/15)

• Punctuation (10/15)
I'll point out the mistake I've also been doing. Capitalising the letters after commas.

• Progress (7/10)
Your book progresses with every update. I like the length of your poems and the way you tell a story in the A/Ns.

• Enjoyment (8/10)
Unique ideas.

• Interaction with readers (20/20)
I haven't spotted a comment that you didn't reply to. Keep it up.
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• Total (81/100)

Your uniqueness stands out in the mystery of each poem. Positive and encouraging too.