| Just Another Beating Heart |

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by randomlypoetic

Dedicated to brookelilac

by randomlypoetic

Book: Just Another Beating Heart

Author: dripping-moonlight

• Book cover (9/10)

I really like your cover, to be honest. Maybe you could change the picture to something about hearts? I don't know, but it's amazing.

• Book title (9/10)
The title is so unique and interesting. I love it.

• Blurb (4/10)
That was a very short blurb. I know that it's a perfect indication about what's inside, but writing a few lines would make the reader want to go further and check out the book.

• Grammar (12/15)
There are small grammatical errors here and there. If you fix them, the poems will be even more amazing.

• Punctuation (10/15)
You could work more on the capitalisation of the letters.

• Progress (9/10)

• Enjoyment (9/10)
I've commented on your book before. Rhyming poetry is a huge thing to me.

• Interaction with readers (18/20)
There are a few unanswered comments here and there.
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• Total (80/100)

Keep writing, and use any piece of advice to make progress. Your book is unique, and as I commented on it before, I like that you appreciate your surroundings. This stands out in your poems.