Chapter 9

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I HAD TO GET YOUR ATTENTION!
Who wants me to continue this story?
If so how would y'all feel about young Henry cavil playing Matthew?

I HAD TO GET YOUR ATTENTION! Who wants me to continue this story? If so how would y'all feel about young Henry cavil playing Matthew?

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Of course I will edit the story that has always been published! Do y'all like Valentina's name or should I change it?

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Of course I will edit the story that has always been published! Do y'all like Valentina's name or should I change it?

Should I also change who adopts her as a baby? Instead of the couple it could be the village leader or mayor! It could be a group of women that could either be some type of nuns or witches they could be good or bad.
Should I also change how Valentina was chosen to be the kings bride? Instead of him deciding when he meets her at his crowning it could be that her adopted family sent her to the palace to work since it was a better living situation. Or If the witches are bad (if we all agree on witches) They give Valentina to Regina (idk what reason yet)
Or Regina going to the village to cause hell for Matthew sees Valentina and how innocent she is and takes her to be taught how to be the perfect wife for her son.

Also I'm going to change the age gaps between Matthew and Valentina! Instead of her being 17 and him being 27 (I know the age gap is sickening! I'm disgusted too! I honestly don't know what I was thinking! Minors if  you are reading know that it's not okay for you to date someone with such a large age gap! Wait until you are an legal adult to do so if you want to! That person is probably using you!!!!)
Instead of Matthew being 27 let's make him 24 and His half brother and Valentina 20!!

If you know any more monsters that could hunt Matthew's village please comment!
Also you can comment suggestions on how to make Regina  and her son even more cruel if you like!

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