Under Your Moon- Revised

Cinder loves to play hard to get, and Kai is still waiting for her to come down from that darkest sky. But, little does she know, he stays awake at night to stare up at the moon, her moon, just to know that she is somewhere, even if it is thousands of miles away. And someday soon, she'll be his.
And she quietly wonders if he stares up at her while she tries to find him, every time Asia passes under her night sky.
There will be crowns, and a ring, and maybe a tiny head of brown hair.

Its basically the same as Under Your Moon, but better :) . I realized that some serious revising was in order, so I'm starting it up here.