Maryam and Shehryaar

This is a novella, it is mostly about a girl named Maryam Afzaal and the twists in her life, the biggest twist came when she met the Dhoombros and her life went upside down.... i am not a really big Fan of Dhoombros but somehow I managed to do justice with them ;) well now those who are giant fans of Dhoombros forgive me if you find any flaw and please comment down so I can improve my writing skills :)