Douluo Dalu: Seeing the world

This is my first time writing and making a story. So if grammar and story is messed up. Sorry.

Douluo Dalu fanfiction

Yin is a blind unfortunate child. He died and reborn in douluo Dalu. Unfortunately, he still blind even in this new world. Can he become a legend to be remembered?

Douluo Dalu and soul land is Tang Jia San Shao. I don't own it

Ps: If anyone wants to criticize, give advice and point out mistake, please do so. I'm really new at writing.