AndrewThompson7

I am now you number one stalker.......

I wasn't talking about the party I was talking what going in here -.- I already planned to work around that don't go jumping to conclusions

Ok so maybe Sunday was a bit of a stretch chapter one might be done im hoping it will but family is making it kind of hard.

i am re-writing "The last gift of the mystics" im hoping it will be done by sunday!

G'day Andrew
          Still a couple of simple typos (looker room (locker room)).
          I think, for the age of the characters, they wouldn't say I am , they'd use contractions, like ' I'm '.
          Otherwise, still an intriguing piece.

going to take a break and post small parts of some side stories. don't expect anything from the last gift of the mystics for a while just taking a break from it.