G'day Andrew
Still a couple of simple typos (looker room (locker room)).
I think, for the age of the characters, they wouldn't say I am , they'd use contractions, like ' I'm '.
Otherwise, still an intriguing piece.
going to take a break and post small parts of some side stories. don't expect anything from the last gift of the mystics for a while just taking a break from it.
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