StephenClarkson

Hey Dragon,
          
          I had a notification from you, but for some reason I can't find your comment anywhere (except for my email)! I just wanted to say thanks for the constructive criticism; I appreciate any and all feedback, and characterisation is something I'm always trying to improve. Hopefully I'll be able to add that extra depth in my longer stories, but I definitely find it tough to add all the backstory and build deep relationships with the short stories.
          
          I'm glad you enjoyed the story and that the ending was a bit of a twist. :-)

lozzykiwi

Hey Dragonwonder (cool username!!), I wanted to say thanks for your votes on the first half of Linked today <3 I hope you're enjoying the story!

lozzykiwi

@Dragonwonder constructive criticism is definitely welcome! Linked isn't edited yet which is one of the reasons I posted it on Wattpad - I needed some feedback because I had nooo idea where to start! So thank you for your thoughts <3
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Dragonwonder

@lozzykiwi Well I probably would of finished reading it if it wasn't two in the morning... It's such a great plot line! I haven't really read anything too similar, so the story is keeping me on my toes with where it is going. If I may give some constructive criticsm, the only part I'm having a hard time with is that it's a bit rushed. The character development isn't entirely there, so I'm not as connected with the characters as I feel I could be. But other than that it's very well written and captivating ♡
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stpolishook

Thanks so much for checking out After Humanity and for the votes! I hope you are enjoying:-)

stpolishook

@Dragonwonder Yay!! Thank you so much! I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed the story and were engaged throughout. That's what I hope to hear! hehe. I really appreciate you checking out the book<3
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Dragonwonder

@stpolishook  just finished  reading the story. It was such an amazing read! Your way of writing is really unique, and I was caught up in the story the entire time.
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stpolishook

Oh and thanks for the vote of The Stranger too!
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jenalee28

Hi! Thanks so much for reading and voting on The Girl From Above. I hope you liked it :)

jenalee28

@jenalee28 Thank you! That makes me so happy that you’re willing to check out my other work :) I really did enjoy your story and I hope you decide to continue it!
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Dragonwonder

@jenalee28 I loved it! It was so well written and the character development was great. I'll definitely be reading the other stories you have posted. And thanks so much for reading my story, I really appreciate the feedback.
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