JohnHudsonStories

@MITBeagle How are you liking the story so far?

breannabennett301bcb

Fixed some grammar errors and made it more clear for chapter one 

JohnHudsonStories

Good. There’s nothing more helpful than running it through Word’s grammar checker. No matter where you are in a book, your reader should be able to answer Who? What? Where? Why? In my book, the reader will always know what day it is, where the characters are, what they are feeling, and why.
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MidnightAfterParty

So posted on reddit; figure i come check out your story; as interested in a good o tale. WW1 is interesting setting. 

MidnightAfterParty

@MidnightAfterParty Hey, if you want and get a chance, give my story a Bood and Snow ; also look for feedback
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MidnightAfterParty

I appreciate it the follow
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The_Pirate_Pen

Are you familiar with Dreamland? It's a discord server for writers (mostly wattpad writers) It offers book promos, covers, and a community of writers you can write and grow with. Monetary services aren't required. It's a writer's playground, really. Let me know if you're interested and I'll send the link❤️
          
          You can also join the community on here. Just search Dreamland Community❤️

JohnHudsonStories

As I understand it, you need to post ten parts before you can join correct? I’m posting every few days. But if you could link to my story when you post your next part… I’m going to fix mine to include your link properly, but I work on a military base during the day so I can only use mobile for now.
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