Lauren Radmire

I'm not around this site a lot. There is one I found: scribophile which offers in depth critiquing of the stories. I'm sure you'll find it may offer more construction to better develop all these aspects. 

Thank you! It was made by @littlegirlblue

Oh hey! I had actually meant to fan you the other day, but went to bed with the tab for After Earth open. When you messaged me earlier, it reminded me to fan you :D