Waiting for a update but you should do a chapter about how one of them has a girlfriend and they get exposed and are forced to bring her over for dinner, and when it’s time for dessert she offers to help hope grab it in the kitchen she physically hurts hope, hope kept it together while she was there and returned to the dining room with dessert, and once they finish dessert they go into the living room and they all talk. Soon after that the girl leaves and Hope passes out for whatever the reason maybe (she lost to much blood etc)