ericahahahaha

http://www.wattpad.com/story/26713588-do-you-see-me
          	It's a paranormal story about two twins who were in involved in an accident, one dies while the other lives.The story continues to unfold as the living twin inherits her sibling's gift, the Sixth Sense, and goes on to unravel the mystery and cause of her family and other innocent souls' deaths.
          	Please show your support guys! Thank you!

alliec_123

Hey!. Im writing a new story and would love to hear your opinion! Need all the advice and feedback I can get! Let me know what you think! Thanks !

ericahahahaha

@alliec_123 I'm sorry it took me this long to get back to you, but I would like to tell you that I'm enjoying the story so far! Other than a few spelling & grammatical errors here and there, the story is great in general! I feel that you could do better with describing the characters' feelings/reasons to their behaviour as it does feel like I've only just skimmed the surface as to why they have reacted to something/someone.
            
            Other than that, you did a really good job! I have faith in you! :)
            
            (Also, if you don't mind I would appreciate it if you would read/vote me story, haha)
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alliec_123

Thanks so much !!!!
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ericahahahaha

@alliecortez Sure! :) I'll give you a feedback after I read it!
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shebreathesbywords

Thanks you for checking out my book and voting on it.XOXO

ericahahahaha

@hopeisagonyofdesire Good luck! :)
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shebreathesbywords

Thank you! I hope I'll also stay with it till the end! XD
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ericahahahaha

@hopeisagonyofdesire Same to you! Your story's awesome, has a very distinct vibe to it :) I hope you'll stay with it till the end!
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ericahahahaha

http://www.wattpad.com/story/26713588-do-you-see-me
          It's a paranormal story about two twins who were in involved in an accident, one dies while the other lives.The story continues to unfold as the living twin inherits her sibling's gift, the Sixth Sense, and goes on to unravel the mystery and cause of her family and other innocent souls' deaths.
          Please show your support guys! Thank you!