Thank you for following me! Please, if you want to, leave a comment on my book saying your thoughts! With your story, would you like me to leave a bit of constructive criticism? I can help you if you want.
Well, for starters, if you do check oit my book then you will see that every new thing that happens requires a new paragraph. Im defiantly not the best writer, i am 14 after all, but i still try my hardest.
@muneebahxoxo
Awesome :)
Don't forget to vote when you like a chapter, more votes will get the story noticed (Well, let me rephrase that, I desperately hope it'll get noticed if it gets some more votes)
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