💫TEEN FICTION RESULTS 💫

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So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !


A special thanks to the judges Adele_Onwuka and  blooddess_  for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.

So without much delay .

                 🌠   1st place 🌠

           Happiest girl in the world by
               winnie_loves_honey

 
                  🌠 2nd place 🌠

           I dare you jojobean1298
                       And
     Not like you by hchladybug1218

                 🌠   3rd place  🌠

          Mixtape laneywritesthings
 
           🌠  Honourable mention  🌠

                The moment we met by
                  IvashkovLightwood
                               And

                 James by Hazel_Cahill
  
PARTICIPANTS SCORES:

1.Can't Change The Fate by ispectacleyou


Title - 4
Cover - 3
Blurb - 6
Plot - 8
Originality - 8
Characters - 9
Grammar/Punctuation - 7
Vocabulary/Spelling - 6
Writing style - 8
Overall enjoyment - 10
Attractive power - 9

Total - 78

Review - The blurb of the story is really short and kinda bad. Try to give it details, so a reader can know what your book is all about. The cover is kinda plain and not so interesting. Try to correct the errors in your work and also correct use of grammar and punctuation shouldn't be left out. Your writing style is good, not too much description or dialogue. I actually loved your work, it's amazing. Good work.

2.James by Hazel_Cahill

Title - 5
Cover - 5
Blurb - 3
Plot - 8
Originality - 9
Characters - 9
Grammar/Punctuation - 8
Vocabulary/Spelling - 9
Writing style - 10
Overall enjoyment - 7
Attractive power - 7

Total - 80

Review - I love the cover of the book. The blurb was very short and not so good. I couldn't even get what the story was about from the blurb. Try to add somethings to it, to make it better. A blurb with interesting details make readers curious to read your work. There also weren't much errors in your work which is good. Great job.

3.The Happiest Girl in the World by winnie_loves_honey

Title - 5
Cover - 5
Blurb - 9
Plot - 10
Originality - 10
Characters - 10
Grammar/Punctuation - 10
Vocabulary/Spelling - 10
Writing style - 10
Overall enjoyment - 9
Attractive power - 9

Total - 97

Review - The title and cover of the book is fantastic. The plot is awesome, well arranged and really intriguing. I like the way the characters were portrayed in the book with different personalities. I didn't see any mistake or error in your work, that's really good. I really enjoyed your book, your writing is exceptional. Great job!

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