THE RISING STAR AWARDS ✔

💫ACTION/ADVENTURE RESULTS💫

So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !

A special thanks to the judge -scarletjones and Duncana1003
for submitting the results so soon. She literally submitted within a week of announcement of the entries.

So without much delay .

                   🌠    1st place  🌠
  The school of Crown Assassins by               
                  ThePsychoQueen_

           
                   🌠  2nd place🌠

      Sinful Hearts by addicreates

                  🌠   3rd place 🌠

                  Perfect by RCorsini

  
           🌠  Honourable Mention 🌠                         

              Death In Mortnis City by
               lukescurlsenthusiast

SCORES OF ALL PARTICIPANTS:

1. "If It Meant to Save the World" by Sewman

Title: 3
Cover: 4
Blurb: 7
Plot: 9
Originality: 9
Characters: 6
Grammar/Punctuation: 4
Vocabulary/Spelling: 6
Writing Style: 5
Overall Enjoyment: 6
Attractive Power: 5

Total: 64

Review: The idea was unique. I like the idea where the protagonist would be considered the antagonist normally. The idea was intriguing. There were lots of missing commas, run-on sentences, and a few missing words. These detracted from the general flow of the story. This story could benefit from greater character building and emotion.

2."Death In Mortnis City" by lukescurlsenthusiast

Title: 4
Cover: 4
Blurb: 7
Plot: 10
Originality: 9
Characters: 10
Grammar/Punctuation: 7
Vocabulary/Spelling: 8
Writing Style: 9
Overall Enjoyment: 9
Attractive Power: 10

Total: 87

Review: There was missing punctuation, but it only distracted from the story in a few places. I really enjoyed the use of emotions and character building in this story. The writing was dark, but it worked well for this book. The character interactions were realistic and an enjoyment to read. Emotion was used well. I will most likely read more sometime in the future.

3. "DIAVOLA-The Night Hunter" by HulkSmash147563

Title: 5
Cover: 5
Blurb: 7
Plot: 9
Originality: 8
Characters: 7
Grammar/Punctuation: 5
Vocabulary/Spelling: 5
Writing Style: 6
Overall Enjoyment: 6
Attractive Power: 6

Total: 69

Review: The story was interesting and different.I love a good, strong female lead, and this story delivered that. The missing punctuation, missing words, and extra spaces really took away from the story. Use of italics was not consistent. More emotion building would really pull the reader in and make them feel connected to the characters.