THE RISING STAR AWARDS ✔

💫POETRY RESULTS💫

So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome ! (I am so sorry for the alignment of scores but i can't help it out, i have edited it 10 times and still it doesn't change)

A special thanks to the judges EvighetInvicta and _miss_idealist_ for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.

So without much delay .

            🌠 1st place 🌠
           Rhythm of the soul by
          WhisperingFlames

             🌠 2nd place 🌠
  
      The brown planet by stats7

             🌠 3rd place 🌠

     Through a looking glass by
                Lmntrryx

                      And

          Emotions by DAJ2020

      🌠 honourable mention 🌠

     My midnight Diary by AnaTae17

SCORES OF ALL PARTICIPANTS

1.A walk in poetry by @yuvikadaga (i can't tag you)

1.Cover - 4/5
2.Title- 3/5
3.Blurb- 4/5
4.Poetic devices/literary devices- 6/10
5.Flow of the poem-8/10
6.Punctuation/Grammar-6 /10
7.Vocabulary/spelling- 8/10
8. Originality- 9/10
9.Writing style- 8/10
10.Attractive power- 8/10

Total 68/90

Review: i enjoyed reading this and i like the series of events . It flowed smoothly but please try to not repeat a line /phrase because it sounds as if you are falling short of lines and yes a bit of work on punctuation.

What i liked the most was the blurb. Short but precise and hits directly to the heart if reader.

2.Brain surgery with keyboard by marsaumell

1.Cover -3/5
2.Title-3.5/5
3.Blurb-2/5
4.Poetic devices/literary devices- 7/10
5.Flow of the poem-8/10
6.Punctuation/Grammar- 7/10
7.Vocabulary/spelling- 9/10
8. Originality- 10/10
9.Writing style- 8/10
10.Attractive power- 7/10

Total: 68.5/90

I like the way you have chosen your words, very wisely and accurately. Your writing style is very precise , you write short but to the point. Just work on punctuations and your rhythmic sense is amazing. It felt like flowing with the poem. Keep up the good work. You can write more in your blurb regarding the content inside your book which makes the reader hooked to your book.

3.Winter wonderland by PriscillaYiadom4

1.Cover - 2/5
2.Title- 3/5
3.Blurb- 2/5
4.Poetic devices/literary devices- 5/10
5.Flow of the poem- 5/10
6.Punctuation/Grammar- 6/10
7.Vocabulary/spelling- 6/10
8. Originality- 7/10
9.Writing style- 6/10
10.Attractive power- 5/10

Total: 44/90

Okay you must be seeing your scores are a bit low so let me explain the reason.
Firstly make an attractive cover for your poem book. Secondly you know a lot of things and have an amazing imagination but you need to arrange the things in a poetic fashion. Try to establish a rhythmic sequence of events. Use some poetic devices and work on punctuations. Don't repeat the first phrase everytime it just kills the interest of the reader. I hope you didn't mind me pointing out your mistakes. Rest you are a store house of imagination and great ideas . Use it to your best.