Haikyuu Angst Book

VERY IMPORTANT

Hello,how are you guys..?,welp mine is very bad and stressful,i have a new insecurities,its about my writings,ived been insicured about the stories i write because of my mom having a friend who writes own fiction love stories and i came to think am i writing good? Am i entertaining my readers enough? So be honest with me....did i ever go wrong with writing these fanfics?