Author: @YikesImLonely
Genre: Fiction
Summary: I remember the day it happened clearly. Wouldn't anyone? It was the 21 st of October in 2006. That's the day I died.
Kylie has lived in the body of a seventeen year old for about three about years now, all alone afraid to let anyone close. When he finally does he loses it all completely. Kylie isn't normal even than the fact that he's immortal. Whenever someone's life is in danger time stops, due to that no one other than death saved his life three years earlier. What happens when he one day can't figure out what's wrong and is he really the only one with this ability?
Age Category: Young Adult
Chapters Reviewed: 11 chapters
•MY REVIEW•
•Category 1- cover & description•
The cover is cool yet simple. The summary is a little confusing and has a lot of typos and grammatical errors in it.
2/5
•Category 2- word choice, punctuation, grammar, spelling, sentence & paragraph structure•
This novel needs major editing. The word choice could definitely improve.
10/20
•Category 3- plot, setting, background/stories, characters•
The plot and all of the characters are really interesting. The author has a very good, solid idea of what their plan is; it's just that I don't think they executed it well.
28/30
•Category 4- writing styles & pace of the story•
Nothing really major is going on in the story. The pace is super slow.
5/15
•Category 5- details & descriptions•
Story could use better descriptions and details of the characters and places.
5/20
•Category 6- originality & overall creativity•
The plotline of this novel is extremely creative and super original. The author just needs to work on the technical aspect of writing and they really need to develop their own writing style.
10/10
60/100
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