Hey guys!! I'm back!!! Soo um.... I don't exactly have any writing for you to consume within a minute 😅😅 Instead I thought of something amazing while looking back at my stories. I'm going to roast my writing so you don't have to!! Anyways, my comments will be in italics and the original will be normal obviously. Enjoy!!
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Dick and Roy were sitting in the living room in the Wayne Manor. Bruce and Oliver were talking in Bruce's personal study. Dick and Roy were currently in an argument.
Okay, my one problem with this is the fact that I wrote 'in' twice. Bruh Idk if it's just me but I find that so annoying when a word was repeated two too many times! I should have said "Dick and Roy were currently in the living room of the Wayne Manor." I think that sounds better to me. Anyways, next!
"No way dude, My millionaire is cooler and better than your Millionaire." Roy debates.
Okay, why is my and millionaire capitalized??
"Uhh, no way dude. Bruce is way cooler and better than Oliver. Plus Bruce is a Billionaire not a millionaire." Dick countered.
Did Dick really have to say "no way dude" too? Man this is bad T^T And AGAIN why is billionaire capitalized?!
Little did they know that the two men in question had finished talking and went over to check on them. They had decided to not announce their presence and just listen to the interesting argument that suddenly popped out of nowhere.
I think if I had said "that had suddenly occurred" It would've sounded better.
"Whatever, my Millionaire donates to charities and orphanages!" Roy says, crossing his arms and smirks with pride staring at Dick. This made Oliver smile that his adopted son was speaking highly of him.
I- bruh it's so cringe and you read this anyways? Why? Thank you but... Why? Okay here's what WRONG with this part, literally how I kept capitalizing words and how I described what Roy was doing T^T
"Oh yea? My Billionaire donates to circuses, and he pays for all of the Justice League's stuff like the Watchtower and the Cave!" Dick said smirking even wider with his arms crossed, staring into Roy's soul with his enchanting blue eyes. This made Bruce smirk, while Roy and Oliver frown a bit. Roy just rolled his eyes.
Omg I always wrote "a bit" and it's so annoying now!! Why'd I bolden so many words?! But I do agree with one thing, Dick's eyes are enchanting. <3
"Yea? Well my Millionaire is Mayor of Star City!" Roy said lifting his chin up proud.
THEY KEEP REPEATING EACH OTHER!! FJMCUHVNIVNDJVBF WELP
"Well my Billionaire is known as The White Knight or Prince of Gotham. He's also The Dark Knight, aka the coolest superhero in the universe!" Dick said, lifting his chin up, mocking Roy. Roy made a 'Hmph' sound before voicing his counterattack.
Bruh, Roy already lost when Dick said Bruce was a billionaire... Actually he lost when he picked a fight with Dick, honestly
"My Millionaire is the best with arrows and is younger than yours!" Roy said, Dick just looked confused as to how that made Oliver better than Bruce. Roy noticed the look and shrugged his shoulders. Dick could hear the unspoken words from that, saying: 'I couldn't think of anything else.' Oliver then decided to make his presence known to the two, coming over and tackling Roy in a hug.
Bruce is good with almost all weapons, I'm sure he's better with bows and arrows... I can see Oliver doing that though hahaha
"Aww, thanks Roy!" Roy rolled his eyes but didn't shove Oliver off this time making him happier about his adopted son. Bruce walks over to Dick and ruffles his hair giving him a proud Father smirk, in which makes Dick happy that he made his Father proud.
Yes, yes we get it! You didn't need to say father so many times smh
"Ok, ok, Ollie. You can get off now. Oh and Dick?" Roy says as Oliver lets go. Dick makes a 'Hmm?' sound to Roy in reply.
Would Roy call Oliver Oliie?
"Your Billionaire is better than my Millionaire." Roy said annoyed with a sigh. Dick gave his signature Robin cackle™ while Bruce smirked even more seeing his son laugh and the fact that Oliver frowned, crossed his arms and pout.
Lol of course Dick wins! Omg how many times will I write "son"?? WE GET IT!
Okay the end of me roasting myself and Roy if I'm being honest lol, hope that wasn't boring... Who am I kidding, It was pretty boring wasn't it? Oh well, bye bye!! ^<^
