Never Mention It

Stories to be told

Hey I'm gonna try a new style of writing my stories! Tell me if this is easier to read/understand.
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Julie walked up to her room hoping that later Luke would come back and maybe talk to her or the guys. She felt horrible for him and wanted to help him. 
Julie POV
I walk up to my bedroom and see someone sitting on the roof outside my window "Luke?"luke looked back at me just sighed "Luke, I was looking for you. Do you wanna talk?" I asked well climbing out my window to go sit next to him "no I'm ok, just have a lot on my mind" he tells me while sniffling. "You've been crying haven't you? Look I know we've only known each other for like a week but you can trust, I've really grown to be comfortable and like you..GUYS, all of you."
He chuckled and looked up at me "I wasn't the best kid when I was alive. I never went to school and when I did I would just skip classes. I was so focused on music and when my parents found out about my grades and me skipping they forbid me from going anywhere if I didn't catch up on my school- obviously I never did so they didn't let me go to any gigs, so I would just sneak out. Then the Orpheum came around and I decided to talk to my mom about it, she didn't let me go so we had a fight, I ran away, and then...well died like a week later, without saying goodbye or apologizing, nothing."
I had tears in my eyes "Luke I am so sorry. That's horrible."
He moved closer to me "that song that you saw in my book, unsaid Emily, is for my mom. I wrote it then night after I ran away. I would love to give it to her but I guess I never will.

An idea propped into my head "maybe you can" Luke looked at me confused "I know this is a lot for you but maybe you still can give it to her, well I can" he furrowed his eyebrows at me "I can say that 'I found it in the garage' and they'll hopefully not be suspicious and maybe you'll finally have closure, with both your parents"
Luke looked at me and then down at his ring his fidgeting with "thank you Julie I'd like that- a lot."
We sat there and just stared into the night sky..I know cheesy but with Luke we sat in the most comfortable silence, his presents was just...calming.
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The next day
Luke's POV
I poofed to my parents house and saw Julie walking up the drive way. Wow this girl is amazing. She's going out of her way to do THIS for me? Maybe I do have a tincy crush-
Julie met me at the door "hey you ready?"
" not really but I know this is for the better" I said well nervously playing with my ring. She rings the doorbell and my dad answers "uh hello, can I help you?"
"Yes hi I'm Julie I live down the street over there, actually in the house your son and his band used to play at, I found this song that he wrote and thought that you might want it." My dad took a sharp inhale "oh yes of course, I'm Mitch" he said well shaking Julies hand.

We walked inside the house and I just got a rush of memories...bad ones.
Julie looked back at me for recognition and I nodded at her.
"Honey! Did I hear the doorbell" my mom-
"Oh yes this is Julie she lives in the house Luke and the band used to rehearse" my dad says well his voice goes quiet when saying my name
"Hello Julie, that's a lovely sweater"
"Thank you it was my moms" Julie replies well looking down. I can tell this is hard for her to. We understand each other so much.
"I came across this song Luke wrote about someone named Emily?" Julie tried to act clueless but she knew everything behind the song
"I'm emily" my mom said well Julie handed her the song
Unsaid Emily
First things first
We start the scene in reverse
All of the lines rehearsed
Disappeared from my mind
When things got loud
One of us running out
I should've turned around
But I had too much pride
No time for goodbyes
Didn't get to apologize
Pieces of a clock that lies broken
If I could take us back, if I could just do that
And write in every empty space the words "I love you" in replace
Then maybe time would not erase me
If you could only know I'd never let you go
And the words I most regret are the ones I never meant to leave
Unsaid Emily
Silent days, mysteries and mistakes
Who'd be the first to break?
Guess we're alike that way
He said, she said
Conversations in my head
And that's just where they're gonna stay forever
If I could take us back, if I could just do that
And write in every empty space the words "I love you" in replace
Then maybe time would not erase me
If you could only know I'd never let you go
And the words I most regret are the ones I never meant to leave
Unsaid Emily
If I could take us back, if I could just do that
And write in every empty space the words "I love you" in replace
Then maybe time would not erase me
If you could only know I'd never let you go
And the words I most regret are the ones I never meant to leave
Unsaid Emily

Everyone in the room had tears in there eyes, including me. Seeing my mom finally read that broke me into pieces. I just had to go so I poofed out.
"Your son I know he was only 17 when he- but he lived doing the one thing that he loved to do, not many people find that, but Luke did, he was lucky" Julie sobbed out
"Thank you so much Julie" Emily said happily crying
"Of course" Julie said as she walked out the house
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I think I like this style better instead of writing each of there names out.
Thx for reading! New chapter soon!
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