MASTERPIECE AWARDS 2021 [Season 1]

ROUND 4 RESULT[part 3]

MASTERPIECE AWARDS 2021
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CRITERIA FOR JUDGING IN ROUND 4
[Story Prologue/First part of the story(20%)]

Interest Catcher- 5%
Imaginary and visual description-5%
Punctuation:5%
Grammar and Spelling: 5%
Total Rate: 20%

THIS ARE THE CRITIQUES AND RATINGS TO FAN FICTION, HISTORICAL FICTION, FANTASY AND SHORT STORY CATEGORY  FOR ROUND 4❕

DISCLAIMER: THE JURIES OF THIS BOOK AWARD ARE HONESTLY, CLEARLY, AND PROFESSIONALLY RATED AND JUDGED THE ENTRIES WITH NO BIAS. THEREFORE WHATEVER THE RESULT OF YOUR MASTERPIECE TO THIS ROUND, ACCEPT IT NICELY. THANKS❕

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FAN FICTION CATEGORY

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TITLE: The Endgame (A Marvel / Star Wars Crossover)
GENRE: Fan fiction
AUTHOR: Sister_Of_Wakanda

JURY #1: _anintrovertgirl (Azalea Vie Hawthorn)
RATINGS
Interest Catcher: 3/5
Imaginary and Visual Description: 4/5
Punctuations: 4/5
Grammar and Spelling: 3/5
TOTAL RATE: 15/20
COMMENTS/FEEDBACKS: The author clearly illustrated the event of the story. But since I'm not into that kind of story, I didn't find it catchy that's why I gave 3 out of 5.

CRITIQUES: Hindi ko maintindihan yung ibang words na ginamit niya but since that was part of the story, that's fine. Siguro hindi lang talaga ako mahilig sa gano'ng story kaya ganito ang feedbacks ko. hahaha.

JURY #2: Danbavarian (Danbavarian WP)
RATINGS
Interest Catcher- 3/5
Imaginary and Visual Description- 2/5
Punctuation- 2/5
Grammar and Spelling- 4/5
TOTAL RATE: 11/20
COMMENTS/FEEDBACKS/CRITIQUES: You need to edit Chapter 1—content and technicalities. Do not forget to divide your
paragraph into three to five sentences only and use EM DASH like this—if you want to interrupt
someone from talking. Plus the fact that the whole part was abused by telling instead of showing the
scenes so better to change it and add setting and character descriptions. Don't just tell, show us the
scene.

TOTAL AVERAGE RATE: 13%

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TITLE: Codename Florinda: Ikaapat na Bahagi
GENRE: Fan Fiction
AUTHOR: DaveHersonElas21

JURY #1: _anintrovertgirl (Azalea Vie Hawthorn)
RATINGS
Interest Catcher: 3/5
Imaginary and Visual Description: 3/5
Punctuations: 4/5
Grammar and Spelling: 4/5
TOTAL RATE: 14/15
COMMENTS/FEEDBACKS: Okay naman yung way ng pag sulat, maganda yung choice of words na ginagamit ng author sa pagsulat.
CRITIQUES: Para sa'kin hindi s'ya catchy. Bore basahin and magulo din. Series yata 'to, that's why 'di ko masyadong maintindihan yung story.

JURY #2: Danbavarian (Danbavarian WP)
RATINGS
Interest Catcher- 2/5
Imaginary and Visual Description- 1/5
Punctuation- 3/5
Grammar and Spelling- 4/5
TOTAL RATE:10/20
COMMENTS/FEEDBACKS/CRITIQUES: Nalilito ako sa nangyayari at mali na maging continuation ng Prologue ang Epilogue (kahit
Series or kasali man 'yan sa -logy). Nakalagay sa first part at dahil na rin siguro sa mga detalye na nai-
mention ng bida, mas lalo akong naguluhan. Idagdag pa na mahaba ito at puno ng fillers. Author,
Prologue ng Codename Florinda of Fourt Part ang meron. Meaning, another conflict ang masasagupa. At
ang nabasa ko sa buong part, about Jhairus and Florense. So kung iisiping mabuti, nagmukhang
Romance. Sa part na 'yan nakatuon ang new adventures o baka hindi lang talaga na-highlight ang main
goal. May nakita rin akong isang part na medyo nakaka-off. Grade 8 pa si Flor pero about love-love na
ang pinagkaabalahan at talagang naghalikan pa sila ni Jhairus. Seriously??? Masyado pa siyang bata for akissing scene. Dapat ang inaatupag niya, pag-aaral, pamilya, pag-aaral, church (kung nagsisimba man) at
sarili. And please be aware sa ellipsis na ginagamit—the difference between three amd four dots.