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Title:
Honestly, I believe, that the Title, isn't bad. Her Soul is often used throughout the story and is also put in view very well. This reminds us why the name fits well. But after reading your story I had a different type of name in mind. For example, I thought of "Edge of Truth", "Hunt", or something like that, for me personally, I guess that would've fit more with the main topic your book revolves around. But "Her Soul" isn't bad at all. 8/10
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Description:
The lines you wrote here, were quite appealing. We can see that Riaan will get Aviana as his next target, but stuff will not go down the way he thinks. Your sentences have enough mysteriousness in them, so they don't spoil anything. The only thing I didn't like about it, was one line. "What if the one who is being claimed as the wrong one is the wronged one?", I don't like it. Because, it technically spoils the whole plot. What we know until that sentence is, that she killed someone and now she is his target, because of what she has done. It's tense till then, but then you give that question, it's obvious, that she'll be innocent and he'll get to know her and find it out, then they will obviously look for the real killer. The whole plot is spoiled. Without that one sentence, the story stays mysterious. 15/20
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