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Your story is about tow souls, who grew apart. Jimin found a new girl, leaving Myeong Jo hurting. Now if Jimin wants to come back to Myeong Jo, then he has to make things right between him and her. Therefore, "Make it Right" is actually a really well chosen name. The only reason, why I am not giving you full points here, is that "Make It Right" is the name of a BTS song, therefore it's not a name, which you completely made yourself. 9/10
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Well, you sadly almost wrote almost the whole storyline in the description. Them being in a relationship before, Jimin having to leave because of BTS and Jimin finding a new girl. You only left out the end, which you already gave three different options onto how the story could end. I would advise you to fill your discretion, with other words, so that you give the readers, the chance to firstly think of how the story could be, and then, when he/she reads the story, they'll see, if they have guessed it right or not. For example, you could write something along the lines:
"Two souls that seemed destined for each other were torn apart by time.
Broken hearts and broken trusts.
Forgetting the other, they wander around, trying their luck with someone else.
However, would it really work,
what they are trying to gain?
Or would time bring them back,
together again?"
I would probably write something like that. 13/20
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