Title: Lives Change
Genre: Mystery/Romance
Author: Jvweez
Chapters: 20
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Title:
Well, I think that your title is very well chosen. It's good because it doesn't tell too much about your story, but at the same time, you give away enough information, for your readers to have a guess about your story, to think of what the story will be like. For me, I would have first thought after just reading the Title, that the Life of the Main character will change after one main event, that will take place in your book. Now, normally, it's always this way, that the Life, changes from easy and simple, to hard and complicated. Nevertheless, after reading your description, in the Comment-Section of my Book, I figured that it might as well be the opposite in your Case. Jiya loses everyone, one by one, the Girl must have learnt not to rely on someone to be there for her, but her life changes, when she finds someone, who is going to stay. And yes, I thought of all this, just by your Comment. You did really well here.
10/10Description:
Reading your description, I thought of my Theory to be right, that someone will fight for her, to trust again. Your description is delightful, because it makes many questions pop up in your readers heads, which is good. In addition, you don't spoil anything from your book. You describe her future to be decided be the result of her Chess game of Life. That was a really beautiful comparison.
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