The Enchanted

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Title: The Enchanted

Genre: paranormal, mystery

Author: pretty_poison_

Chapters: 25 (I finished your review when you only had 22 Chapters)

I apologize for not uploading your review before, even after I was done. Something came up in my private life, therefore your review got delayed. I'm sorry. Anyways, let's start.

Title:

"Enchanted" is a word used, when describing something put under a spell, something being bewitched. The whole city is somehow enchanted. There are too many weird things happening, unexplainable things.
8/10 

Description:

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Description:

You wrote the description very well. An unusual city with mysteries, unexpected encounters and upcoming questions. In the description you said, that she wants to find out who the serial killer is before it's too late. From there I can see that your story will contain action and it will be intense.
15/20

Cover:

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Cover:

The first time I saw the Cover, I was honestly expecting something different from what I got to see in the end

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The first time I saw the Cover, I was honestly expecting something different from what I got to see in the end. The girl on the Cover is in a dark and creepy looking forest with a beautiful long black ball gown. The town is surrounded by a creepy forest, but the dress combined with the surrounding made me think that your story takes part in the early Middle-Ages. I just got a different vibe from the Cover. Maybe, because nowadays it's not common to see a girl in a big gown walking around in the woods like that.
15/25

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