Blinded Tickle

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This is something I decided to do because it came up in my head. So I got the idea from reading 'Flawless' by JustWritingMyDreams She's a fabulous writer with so many tickle ideas that I really like. No I am not stealing any of her characters. The character's I'm using are made up but the universe is the same. Again this is dedicated to her. And I hope you enjoy it.

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Macie closed the door to her bedroom and plunged herself on the bed. She was really tired from the work she had to do in school. She wish she could just stay home. But unfortunately, life was not on her side. She lived in an apartment on her own because her parents were stuck in South America for the month. She wanted to come but of course her mother declined.

So she was on her bed. Sad. Lonely. And wish that she had a friend with her.

Then all of a sudden, she felt someone covering her eyes. "What the-!" she tried to say as the intruder bit her neck which made her giggle. "Don't look sweetie." It was a boy. And he sounded really....attractive. And they way he called her sweetie. It made her insides tingle. Though that feeling was soon forgotten when she felt another feeling. And this feeling made her laugh. A lot.

The attractive boy started to wiggle his fingers all over her stomach. Macie thrashed and kicked and laughed trying to made him stop but the boy was behind her and she had no idea how to stop him. "LET ME GO!" She tried to yelled combined with the giggling. The mystery boy chuckled and stopped his torture. "And let a pretty face like yourself go to waste? I don't think so." he replied as he squeezed Macie's cheeks together like she was a baby. "Goochie goochie goo." He said in the most babyish voice he could think of which made Macie laugh even more.

Soon the mystery boy uncovered Macie's eyes to reveal himself. He was tall, strong, and like before, very attractive. Macie just stared at him until he suddenly vanished. Macie was shocked and looked around for him to come back. The only response she received was 10 fingers plunging into her sides. "STOP IT!" She laughed and tried to say but it was difficult because it tickled so much. "No can do sweetie." That nickname again. It sent another tingle up her spine. Something about her really liked that nickname.

That's when Macie also realized that he was invisible. What in the world?! She tried to get off of the bed but was brought back with a sudden force as one hand shot up her abdomen while another found it's way up her neck. She squealed in delight as the mystery boy smirked at her state. "PLEASE STOP!" she pleaded as the invisible boy led her down and revealed himself again. He looked down on her and smiled. "Look at how cute you are." he said as he vanished again.

Macie quickly sat up and looked around the room. "Goochie goochie goo sweetie." His voice sounded all around the room as Macie giggled in anticipation. She then felt someone pushing her down and saw her shirt lifting up on it's own. "Time for the finale." Macie heard the boy say as she felt a vibration on her belly. It was a huge raspberry. Macie lost it and laughed hysterically on the bed, unable to defend her poor ticklish belly.

When the boy was done, he revealed himself for a 3rd time and looked at Macie. "Name's Sam." he said as Macie observed him. "Macie." she said after she regained her breathing. Sam smirked at her. "See ya around." With that, he vanished for a final time and left Macie with a wide smile on her face.

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There done! I hope you like it.

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