The first part of the rewrite is completed with 10 chapters accounting for about 12K words! I'll be taking a break! Unfortunately, I've been swamped with a lot of work, I have only one chapter written so far. I'm going to try my best wrap the rewrite up as soon as I can.
Guide for old readers and re-readers.
{not spoiler-free, character names have been revealed}
Chapter 1 - edited, no major changes.
Chapter 2 - edited, no major changes.
Chapter 3 - edited, no major changes.
Chapter 4 - edited, major character personality change (Eric), slight scene change.
Chapter 5 - edited, major character personality change (Reine), 2 scenes slightly changed.
Chapter 6 - edited, major character personality change (Selene), newly written chapter, huge scene change.
Chapter 7 - edited, major character personality change (Aria), major identity change (Uta Kingdom), new character personality (Aria's Father), newly written chapter, completely new scene.
Chapter 8 - edited, major character motivation change (Selene), newly introduced character backstory (Eric), newly written chapter, huge scene change.
Chapter 9 - edited, major character motivation change (Helen), newly written chapter, huge scene change.
Chapter 10 - edited, newly written chapter, one new scene and a moderate scene change.
Well, that's about it currently. I'll update the list later on.
The butterfly effect is now in full force, so most chapters hereafter will be completely new, but the old main plot will remain. Please note many chapters will be chopped and then pieced together, hence all chapters will remain to have mixed up remnants and the Chapter numbering will differ.
Thank you!
(Let's not talk about that one time I realized I wrote that two Kingdoms had an Alliance for centuries but I made one King born with another mother and pretty much realized the centuries thing wouldn't work in the long run because it'd eventually turn into incest (if only applicable?) and I was so confused.)
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Hello, readers of Selene!
I'm Asha, the author of this book. I hope you have enjoyed/are enjoying the story!
I just wanted to let you know about a possible rewrite I have planned out (in July, 2021).
Last year, I was trying to enroll Selene in the Wattys Shorts Contest. Thing is, I did not realize how much I had to shorten things to fit it in 20K words. Starting from Aria's chapters to Helene and Selene's relationship. I have gotten comments letting me know few readers didn't get a few parts, and that's a fault at my part.
I want to correct my mistake.
Therefore, I request you to please let me know of any parts you didn't understand/could've been written better/was rushed, or any plot holes, etc.
I am well-aware of the problem of Aria's backstory not making sense and Helen's last narrated chapter being slightly confusing. Selene's last narrated chapter was rushed and needs some fixing. Akira's chapter also needs to be edited.
I believe my writing has gotten a bit better, though Selene's a work I am very proud of, it can be better still!
I am willing to improve.
I hope you will provide me with your valuable comments and support.
Thank you very much!
We are also nearing 4.8K reads... thank you VERY, VERY much!
~ Asha
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Selene
Fantasía(Completed) (Editing in progress) She was a Princess every Kingdom feared; every Crown Bearer avoided; every Dynasty remembered. Selene Yami. A threat to her mother. A stranger to her twin. A savior to her father. She was trained under ruthless cond...
