Fallen

Love at First Sight...

Hey guyss! Hope you like thi one! I had a total case of writers block so this probably won't be very good. :/ still, Voteeeee and enjoy!

Xoxoxoxo,

Syd<33333

Chapter 6

(Louis's point of view)

This is the night. I saw a picture of and I swear I fell in love. But, peasant, I need to make a good impression so I can see where this takes me. Lets see, Harry and I are leaving at eight o'clock and it six thirty. So I decided to take a shower, and got in my usual pub clothes, put on some cologne, and went to grab some food. Lets just say that when I went to the kitchen to get some chicken for a quick dinner, I saw Niall... And Bryana, snogging on the couch. It used to hurt seeing them flirt right in front of me when I liked her, but now it's just awkward.

I decided to be as quiet as possible and just crept into Harry's room to chat before we left. I ran up the steps, down the hall, turned left, and ran into his room, and yelled,

"HARRY!!!"

"LOUIS!!!"

"What's up dude? You taking Amanda to the joint tonight bro?"

"Nah. I decided I'm going stag tonight. All I'm gonna do is be your wingman bud! I want you to meet El! She's so sweet and totally capable of putting up with your interesting ways."

"I sure hope sp dude. She is smokin' and I am excited to meet her! Come on let's go."

. . .

Haz and I snuck out without disturbing Ni and Bry, who were getting pretty heated. After saying bye to Liam and Alex, who were sitting outside on the swing, we got into the Audi and drove off towards the pub. I was bouncing in my seat while Harry was driving and laughing at me. It see,ex to me we weren't going fast enough. After about ten minutes, we were finally there! I had never been so anxious to do something in ,y whole life.

"Ok Lou, remember to just stay cool and see I this works out ok? Ill be right next to you th whole night mate."

"Deal. Let go! Se could be here already!"

"Calm down first. Good. Calm? Lets go then!

We walked in nice and unaware. I looked Round the room looking for her gorgeous long brown hair running down her back when I saw her. She was even prettier in person. I walked/jogged up to her Nd tapped her on the shoulder. She turned around and stared at me. I did the same.

"H-hi. I'm Louis and....wow."

"What's wrong?" She said. Her voice was like silk, and those lips. I couldn't keep from staring at them. I just wAnted to kiss them that bad.

"You are just so beautiful, I couldn't help but notice. Sorry." I said have laughing and bowing my head so she wouldn't see me blush.

All of a sudden, another voice came up behind me and gave Eleanor a great bear hug. "Eleanor! It's great to see you again!" Harry.

"It's brilliant to see you harry. Thanks for letting me meet Louis. You know I wanted to meet him and I can tell we will love each othe-"

Did I just hear her correctly? Did she say love?

"Whats that love?" I asked shakily.

"I meant we will get along with each other. Yes, that's what I meant to say." She blushed, hard.

Then harry interjected our stares. "Wy don't you just ask her to dance or something? Oo get her a drink fist mate!" He whispered in my ear.

"Um, do up want something to drink?"

"Yes please! Can i have an iced tea?"

"Strong or regular?"

"Strong!" She said winking. I knew exactly what she meant so I went up to the bar and asked for an iced tea. Strong.

When I came back, she and Harry were laughing, probably over something funny or embarrassing that I did. I was so right. Haz was telling Eleanor about the time I first became obsessed with carrots. Good times...

I walked up and cleared my throat. "Hey Eleanor, so you any to dance?" I handed her the drink.

"Um, let me drink this first, then yes I would love to dance with you."

I nodded and waited for her to finish while I talked to her about what she did. She is a student at the university on Manchester, and has a dog named pepper. It was nice talking to her because she talked to me like I was Louis Tomlinson, not LOUIS TOMLINSON! Of One Direction.

"So," she asked me. "How about that dance now?" She is so pretty and she acts like she knows exactly how to get me to like her.

"Let's go!" I grabbed her hand and we went to the middle of the dance floor. No one noticed who I was so that was a relief.

I had a blast. Her hips moving in sync with mi e, best night ever. It seemed to me it didn't last long enough. But the time came when we had to leave, and we exchanged cell numbers, twitters, and Instagrams. I took a good picture I me and set it as my caller id. Then we said about goodbyes, and so did Harry, who was dancing with another girl at the time.

. . .

"I hope that a picture of you dancing with that girl doesn't leak onto the web dude." I said to Harry in the car on our way home. I was completely exhausted, but I had a blast.

"Yeah me to mate. Amanda, knowing her, would be furious. She likes to overreact that way." He sounded a little nervous lately, I hope everything is ok with him and Amanda. He needs a solid relationship right now.

We sat in silence the rest of the way. It was fine because we were both tired and I was a bit tipsy. It took about ten minutes to get home, and when we got there, everyone was waiting for us.

We walked in, and everyone came up to me and asked how it went.

"Did you guts have a good time?" Zayn.

"How was she!?" Niall.

"Is she nice?" Alex.

"Is she pretty?" Bryana.

"Yes! She is smart, fun, gorgeous, and nice as can be!" I said a little exasperated. "Anyway, I'm going to bed. I'm beat guys. Night"

"Night!" They all said in unison as I walks up the stairs of the flat and closed my door with a carrot poster on the front, and collapsed on my bed. I looked at my ceiling. I am very lucky to hav met her. She and I will date in no time, and hopefully move even further. Don't get ahead Louis, I told myself. Just work on dating her and se where it goes from there. I nodded to myself as I nodded off to a sound sleep filled with dreams of Eleanor J. Calder. The love of my life.

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Sooo???? What did you think? Pretty bad huh? :( stupid writes block! Plus, it's short. Still.... Please vvvooooootttttteeeee! :)

Xoxoxo,

Syd<333333