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-----------------------------Rydels POV
I am alone in my room, breathing heavily over what I just occurred downstairs. I hear footsteps coming up, knowing they are heading for my room, I breath quietly. Maybe they won't know I'm in here...
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Ariel's POV (first one yay)
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(Back to the story)
Ariel's POV
When Rydel ran up to her room, the girls got up and were going to go follow her, when the guys stood in our path. Laura tried jumping on the couch to get around them, but fell, Vanessa tried to tackle them, but it just ended up with them pinning us so that we couldn't get up.
"Well this is fun," I comment, my face squished on the floor.
"You can't go up there she needs alone time," Riker says.
"Riker don't you care that Rydel is probably crying her eyes out up there? She needs comforters right now and we're not there right now because our faces are squished against the carpet," I comment.
Riker sighs. "I just don't want her growing up too much," he says.
"Why?" Vanessa asks, getting up, finally released from Riker's grip.
"Because," he explains, "it makes me feel old."
"I'm free!!!!" Laura sings, running up the stairs to Rydels room.
"Not for long!!" Ross exclaims, running to catch her. A few moments later he returns, carrying her over his shoulders and he plops her on the couch.
"Hey where is Ratliff? Rocky asks.
Ratliffs POV
While the guys were weirdly distracting the girls I decided to go talk to Rydel. Who would do that to them back there? Am I the only normal one in this house?
I reach Rydels bedroom, I knock on the door and I head shuffling. I take s bobby pin from my back pocket. Yes I have a bobby pin. What guys can have bobby pins too! Anyways. I open the door and it unlocks perfectly. I'm a pro at this. And no fyi I have not tried this before... Okay!! I admit I did try on one of her bras before.. It was a dare okay?!.. Okay I was curious.. don't judge. So I open the door to find Rydel, in the closet, crying a bit.
"Hey," I greet her sitting next to her in her walk in closet.
Don't look at the bras, don't look at the bras Ellington Ratliff focus..
"Hi," she replies. I could hear the hurt. In her voice.
"So you like me?" I ask her. She doesn't say anything she just looks down at her feet.
I list her chin up with my thumb, "Look at me," I say. Her beautiful Hazel eyes shift towards my gaze.
"You like me?!" I repeat myself.
"Y-yes," she says.
Thump, Thump, Thump, Thump.
My heart thumped so loud that I could hear it in my hears, my shoulders relaxed and my head heated up.
I felt something.
"I'm sorry Ratliff.." she says.
"Rydel, I like you too," I say.
Back with the others:
Vanessa's POV
Riker helped me up off the floor, and i got up. I looked at him, I felt something.
"Riker, have we met before?"
-flashback-
(Vanessa POV still btw)
Crash.
My heart crashed, I crashed, my car crashed. He had just broken up with me because we were going our own way. Someone crashed into me. I reach into my pocket and find my cracked phone. I turn it on and call Riker. He was the last person I called. He called me an hour ago to tell me to come over to his house. Before I knew it I passed out, police, ambulances and fire trucks were swarming. Before my eyes I was taken away, and in a hospital. All I see is darkness.
Hours later I awake. I cringe at the brightness of the white walls. They should really get some curtains. I see a figure of a man sitting next to me gazing into my eyes with tears in his. I feel really weak and I'm very tired. I knew the boy, Riker. He was leaving back to his family next week. So was I, we would never meet again. Our love was tragic.
"Hey," he says.
I smile, too weak to talk.
The doctor walks in. He gives me some water and I feel a tiny bit better. It least I can talk now.
I feel super weak. I hear beeping and my heart thumping really loud. 4 doctors come rushing to help me.
"Put her in a coma!!" One of them yells.
"Get that boy out of here," another doctor shouts.
"Riker!! I will always love you!!" I exclaim as I drift off.
I don't hear his response. I'm in a coma. For 2 weeks. When I awake I forget all about him. My family is the only thing I have left now.
(End of flashback)
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