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If I let you in, would you break me? You say no, but I am not going to take that risk. I'm sorry, but these scars from my heart are transferring to my wrist.  

I lost the will to trust, but when you leave me, my steel heart will turn to rust, the lock will be useless, then you'd feel clueless, when I'm blowing in the wind along with the dust.

So when you tell me 'Let you in' you'll only make me cry, when I am truly sad... you would never even try.

My heart was glass, clear and pure. Now it's broken, by people

Like you.

So please don't ask 'Please

Let me in' I've dealt with enough lies. I've been shattered again and again. I'm not ready -nor will I ever be- for you to 'win' My trust.

I apologize,  but I have taped my heart back together so many times, peices are missing. You say let you in, but I REFUSE to be broken again.

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I wrote a comment, in a story, I did not think about what I wrote, it just came out.

I really liked it, and someone else did too, I wonder what you think? Although you might not even care.

Anyway, I liked it so much, so why not put it here?

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