85. Point of Retreat

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****Plzz gyzz Kanjuso ki tarah commnt mat karna plzzz me update me kanjusi ni krty to commnts me kanjusi kyu yr... tumlogo agar achr se bhar bhar k feedback ni doge to motivation kaha se ayega mujhe 😭😭 itz a huge part so plz huge commnts***

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Scene starts from night

Kabir was thinking all those wht muskan said it was haunting in his mind he was hurt but still he was ready to make it up..

kabir thinks - mere itna kehne k baad bhi tum ni mani muskan.... u think so low about me?? (sad) tumhe lgta h ek choty si baat k liye me tumhe waha jane se rokunga....

the way muskan called him a lier it pricked his heart....

Kunj came that time - Dadu... 

kabir quiet

kunj concern - Dadu .... u okay???

kabir - M fine.. kunj . jzz leave me

Kunj - d..dadu.. if u want u can share with me...

kabir quiet he was not really in a mood to talk

Kunj - RAHAT  kon h dadu?

kabir tighten his fist hearing this name n was stunned

kabir turned shocked - Kunj tu... 

kunj sighs - meine sunli thi apki or muskan ki baat ... and aplog kuch Rahat ko leke baat kar re tha... kon h ye rahat....

kabir turned away

kunj - Dadu plz tell me .. may be i can help... 

kabir - kia help karega yr .. kia?? meine har tarha se smjhake dkh lia.. but no use to jese mujhpe bharosa he ni h ..  use lag ra h use rokne k liye me ye sab bol ra hu!!  to me or kia he bolu usko...

Kunj - dadu but ye rahat kon h...!

Kabir sighs - Rahat... muskan ki life me mere ane se phle se tha... he was an obsessed lover of muskan ..   muskan ko tang krta tha... enforced krta tha apna deceision uspe...  and she used to be frightened traumatised.... humesha dari dari si rehty h uski wjh se.... fir jab mujhe usk bare me pta chla i teached him good lesson... and made sure that he was behind bars... bcz usk kafi criminal records bhi rahe h ...  to kuch saalo k liye usko jail hogyi

(Tani :- ye unlogo k liye clearification jo keh re tha kabir ki wajh se muskan phasty h kabir ne rivals pal rakhe h and pisty muskan h.. so let me tell u .. ye muskan k life ka kata tha jisko kabir ne apne life ka kata bna dia.. ❤️)

kunj tensed - omg dadu... kahi muskan ka shimla se call ana us Rahat ka plan to ni??

otherhand in shimla

Rahat was smirking holding muskan's picture

Rahat caressing the picture - Itne saal muskan.... itna saal se tumhara intezar kia h ... and now i just cant wait to have you in my arms....  bht pyaar krta hu muskan... tumse bht!!! us Kabir se to kahi guna zyada ... and m sure jab tum yha aogi na to tumhe me ye beleive karake rahunga....

With this he kissed her picture

With this he kissed her picture

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