Hi.
This is my first time using Wattpad and I'm going into it with no expectations, but hoping for some constructive feedback.
At 96,000 words, BROKEN SKY is complete in the sense that the storyline won't change unless someone points out an obvious problem. In my limited experience as an editor, I've found that all writers are blind to certain aspects of their own work, so I assume I am as well.
BROKEN SKY is a "Clean Read", but doesn't have an underlying religious or moral message; it's simply meant to be accessible to a wide audience. The main characters are teens but it's written in a style adult readers will enjoy.
Though it's a science-fiction story, the SF elements are downplayed, almost mundane, and I'll also characterize it as "apocalypse-lite". You won't find a strong dystopian theme here, nor a utopian one. Instead, BROKEN SKY is a light, fun adventure with humor and friendship based on trust and respect.
I've completed book two of the series--in which Jack and Sarah's world begins its transformation from technological to magical--and have begun work on book three--in which the role of the dragons (yes, dragons on a space station) is fully revealed.
I hope you enjoy it, and I welcome your comments.
John Harvey
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Broken Sky
Science FictionSir Isaac Newton predicted the world would end before 2090. He was right. Now, the Travellers-people who can "remember" their own futures-have determined that Earth's final day is just weeks away. Jack Scatter is an ordinary teenager with the normal...
