𝐊𝐎𝐑𝐄𝐀𝐍 𝐁𝐄𝐀𝐔𝐓𝐘

🥡𝐁𝐎𝐍𝐔𝐒🥡

It finished.

Yay~

I enjoyed writing this though it's a little messy, it doesn't have the vocabulary I intend to use most of the time.

I tried to put some immaturity into my writing, I found it fascinating in a sort of way that it was immaturely written, yet it told the story so well. The reason was that Jungkook and Jimin are both young, well Jungkook is, but Jimin is a young man and some of his actions are immature so I wanted it to be messy, a little disturbing, cliche, and immature. I tried not to use much vocabulary, I feared that it would make the story sound more mature so I didn't do that. The ending was messy too (for me it was), but I still enjoyed it and I hope you did too.

-Lolo

-Some cool things you might've not noticed-

𝟒𝟕- The number is powerful, yet a spiritual number it consists of the two most powerful numbers. 4 and 7. It is a love number. But this number was used as a metaphor for Jungkook throughout the story, in the hospital when Jimin saw the time, it was 10:47. So in one way or another, I tried to use symbolism to show that the plan they were speaking about was about Jungkook. Then again it was a metaphor I used for Jungkook. He was a winner and not a loser, he was the meaning of the number: determined, imaginative, creative, focused. When he would be in problems he would try to improvise the best he could. But then 47 can be a bad number too and again Jungkook was a winner, not a loser. The number can bring bad luck and it brings personal challenges that make them realize sometimes. Therefore, because of what happened with Jimin and because he had won when at that moment he didn't want to be there and he saw Taehyung smiling at him with teary eyes. He realized that winning was not something he wanted, that because he strived to win, he lost Jimin who was more important than the crown. That moment he became a loser to see Taehyung he a winner be the knowing that even with the crown, without his lover he was a loser.

𝐂𝐑𝐎𝐖𝐍- in many scenes, the crown is used to showcase the different statuses in society. When Jungkook wears the crown or any of the men. The others are a status lower than him. The crown is explained to have diamonds in it, this was used to show how the crown means money. People who have money will always have a bigger status than the ones who don't. And sometimes they abuse their power for their own selfish needs. This is why everyone there wanted the crown, it would represent how they are higher than everyone else.

𝐂𝐇𝐈𝐍𝐄𝐒𝐄 𝐓𝐀𝐊𝐄𝐎𝐔𝐓: In many chapters, Jungkook and Jimin are eating out of a Chinese take-out box. And I think that it's a little ironic, but the first thing a person might think when they see someone Asian is, 'Oh their Chinese' as a child, people were racist to Jungkook because of his race. So when they eat it shows that when people throw hate at them, that they will eat it and it will come out like shit. Another thing is the Chinese Takeout Box showcases Jungkook's emotions. If it gets wet, it breaks. If it gets too filled. It eventually breaks. And that is what happens with Jungkook. He tries to keep his feelings in him, but when they are too much he has to break down and he feels hopeless because he can't stop his feelings from overflowing.

𝐏𝐇𝐎𝐍𝐄 𝐂𝐀𝐋𝐋𝐒: in the story, Jungkook speaks on the phone three times. One with Dan and the other with his mother and lastly Jimin. I thought that it would be cool to write it in this way, but basically- Jungkook had known his mother and Dan his whole life. They are his family. Yet, when they call him and he hears their voices he can't seem to recognize them, he had to check the names so that he knows it's them. It shows how there is a distance and some neglection between them and Jungkook. Then in the last phone call, he does not check the name of who's calling him, he just answers it. And just by hearing the breathing pattern, he knows it's Jimin. It showcases how all those months together he and Jimin made a connection so strong that he, his mother, and Dan never made it over the course of nineteen years.