Love Limited by ( ayeshaeyesshot )
DELIVERY
Not as complex as I'd have liked but hopefully it's all right.
NEW BLURB 1
Tamara has just married the wrong man. Literally. Her love for Murtaza was never-ending. But when a series of unfortunate events and miscommunications lands her at the alter with his older brother, Murat, she's left with very few options.
To make matters worse, her parents had moved heaven and earth to honor her wish by allowing this marriage to take place. She resolves to tell them, to confess that the money, time, and sacrifice put into trying to make her happy has led to the worst outcome of her life.
But when she overhears her parent's whispered discussion, the secret Tamara discovers wipes away all her defiance. She MUST marry Murat. And so, she makes a sacrifice, too--she decides to accept her fate and learn to love her new husband. But her former lover--her new brother-in-law--refuses to let her.
NEW BLURB 2
Tamara has just married the wrong man. Literally. Her love for Murtaza was never-ending. But when a series of unfortunate events and miscommunications lands her at the alter with his older brother, Murat, she's left with very few options.
To make matters worse, her parents had moved heaven and earth to honor her wish by allowing this marriage to take place. But how could she tell that the money, time, and sacrifice put into trying to make her happy has led to the worst outcome of her life?
She couldn't, especially with the secret she overhears between her parents in passing. And so, she makes a sacrifice, too--she decides to accept her fate and learn to love her new husband. But her former lover--her new brother-in-law--refuses to let her.
OLD BLURB
"Mur stop" I whispered as he clasped my wrists behind my back "why should I" he said as he approached my face, gripped my chin tightly, and licked his lips "it was ME who you were supposed to get married to not him!" He yelled and smashed his lips against mine.
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Murtaza and Tamara are in love, and Murtaza tells her that he would send his parents to her house to ask for her hand in marriage, which she is overjoyed about.
Tamara's parents agree and inform her that they have fixed her marriage with Mr. Dashti's son, and she quickly hugs her mother with joy, but she has no idea that they requested for her hand in marriage for their older son Murat, not Murtaza, as she had assumed.
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